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7/28/22, 9:14 PM
Chapter two was good, really loved the hypno-duel. Wonder what would happen if there was a draw.
7/28/22, 3:14 PM
I really love how immersed we get in Talley’s POV. The insight we get into his thoughts, feelings, and overwhelm in the moment is fantastic. Plus it’s a super-hot (non-stop) sex scene, and you handle the pacing really well. Great work!

7/28/22, 7:26 PM
@Noam de Pluma I felt that work on this story really helped me improve my ability to flesh out a character into a whole, immersive person. I think it paid off with Axel and Tao in _Curse of the Werebull_, but I still have more work to do. I'm also glad my non-stop sex remains hot, haha, I strive for edging a _little_ more than climaxing but I can usually rub one out to my scenes at certain spots.
7/28/22, 7:26 PM
The plot thiccens and the Don got a new toy. Perfect
7/28/22, 7:05 PM
My favourite stores so far
7/28/22, 7:04 PM
My favourite series of stories
7/27/22, 2:43 PM
Dear GoonNoob, nice story :eggplant: :sweat_drops::sweat_drops: I'm still waiting for a spin-off "From Thieves to Thong Fags" featuring Mike I'm thinking of new love fantasy of a giant muscle man (daddy figure) and 16 yr boy short-skinny-twink (fatherless) meet at gym. the boy need a trainer/coach and he stands till under the coach balls and fits perfectly between the giant musclar tree trunk legs. thanks again

7/27/22, 5:37 PM
@Gaylost_boy_dxb thanks! Mike did make a cameos in the last 2 chapters of "Bad Cop turned Good Dog" where he's still happily dating Brock, and I intend for them to stay happily ever after lol. I like your idea of a muscle daddy taking a skinny twink under his wing as his personal trainer.
7/28/22, 5:59 PM
thanks, love this story!
7/27/22, 8:48 AM
As well written as ever...the hint of darker things to come and the continued slow taking cotrol through smoking and hypno is superb.

7/28/22, 6:58 AM
@DriftingScot Great to get your comments, and perceptive as ever. One of the strands of the story is the similarity between smoking and hypnosis, the Davy character recognises, rationally, that his behaviours are self-destructive but the pleasures he gets are such that he just can't help himself - he's always got to smoke the next cigarette and he's always got to let the Doctor take more control.

7/28/22, 3:58 PM
@Whitechap_e1That's exactly why I enjoy this story...when smoking becomes the guilty pleasure and then perhaps the trigger...driven to inhale the smoke whilst on exhaling letting your thoughts drift away...each draw taking the subject deeper or sharing the smoke of another slave as you brilliantly put it...perfectly poised for the next installment!
7/28/22, 3:42 PM
I can’t believe it took me so long to get into this story! Great read, and would love to see where this long arch goes!
7/28/22, 3:05 PM
Very hot series! Wonder if Aiden is going to remember Zane aging down Bruce and how he will react if so...