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Jul 20, 2022
7/27/22, 5:46 AM
Seriously can't get enough of this story... Not usually into gainer or feeder stuff but this is sensational. What have you awakened?! Hahaha
7/27/22, 5:24 AM
Man, I'm on the edge of my seat! Seeing the mental transformation that takes place, it's clear that he wins and drinks the boiling gold stuff, given the kind of man he becomes. I wonder if his intentions up until then are pure, but after the mental transformation he reneges and betrays his friends, or even subjugates them himself? 🤔
7/27/22, 4:04 AM
Oh wow. So, I guess Bratt isn’t going back to college.
7/27/22, 4:02 AM
I love the extreme elements. Even though I know part of the story is spoiled, part of the fun is seeing exactly how it goes down. Booker isn’t that reliable of a character anyways, especially in Two Tops.
5/29/22, 8:25 PM
Please continue this story

7/27/22, 4:02 AM
@Italianjoker, @JR, @BenConners12 Thank you for the reviews. I don't normally write gay stories, so this was a fun challenge for me. I'm probably not going to continue this (honestly, I really just wrote it because I'm very eager to read the other Draco Malfoy story on this site and got tired of waiting). I have other HP fanficiton on other sites that are m/f, bi-curious and follow similar themes though.
nycboot
7/27/22, 12:36 AM
So exciting! I'm not one to hope or predict the outcome of stories, but I do hope Jared is transformed, especially in mind. I don't want Connor to become a toilet.
7/26/22, 7:45 PM
“grinding their hips into each other to let their micropenises flick against each other while their pecs thrashed to stimulate their freak tits.” Oooooffffffff fuck dude. These guys can’t catch a break!

7/26/22, 11:17 PM
@Gay Chaste when I'm in control of the narrative, NOBODY catches a break! XD
7/26/22, 2:36 PM
Honestly a twist Abt how the baby qyallar are made would be cool. It would be neat to see u branch out into some mpreg.

7/26/22, 11:16 PM
@Badusername - while I don't think in the next chapter I specifically state otherwise, it's just cum inflation. ... although we never do see any Wiraqocha women
7/26/22, 7:10 PM
See thanks to Two Tops I know that Jared will escape. However I'm still at the edge of my seat because I have no idea if Connor and the rest will also escape. Love this!

7/26/22, 11:15 PM
@Zi19 ssh spoilers ;)
Chase
7/26/22, 10:55 PM
Glad the twins have been treated so badly. The weakest of the Petersons so totally destroyed, their individuality, their dreams, all lost to be worthless pieces of furniture. Also glad Larry gets Zack back to use and live off of. So where Zack belongs. Thanks Edlam for finishing!!!