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7/27/22, 12:06 PM
This had been wonderful to read from the start! The first few chapters really reminder of A J Ambrose's, Coaches Submissive Jock series. Except the jock was willing. But I love the subjugation and dominance here. I love the twists with the janitor and the white speedo. And clearly his dad is taking into the coaches influence too. Perhaps the coach can get the jock into chastity? It would be easy to trick good dad into thinking it would keep his son 'pure'. And it would be another humiliation on the team. Or maybe as a punishment he had to go to practice plugged? It would also really drive up his libido with those supplements he had to take. But I'm really wondering how the coach will continue his control after the school year or if he will learn of the janitor. Please keep the story going!
nycboot
7/27/22, 1:17 AM
Very nice start!

7/27/22, 11:32 AM
@nycboot Thank you! Hope you enjoy the next few chapters too!
7/27/22, 9:51 AM
So hot, can't wait for more chapters 😍
7/27/22, 9:36 AM
This story wakes me up so horny in the early morning before my alarm goes off. I love the cock shrinking and balls enlargement so much, coupled with the allusion to chastity. Nipple stuff too?! You're ruining me so well. You just might make me climax in my cage.
7/27/22, 8:28 AM
Another brilliant story. Linking the guilty pleasure of smoking with sex is a terrific idea..looking forward to the next installment..I expect Davy to drift off quite a few times
7/27/22, 6:41 AM
The idea is really intersting, can't wait to read more of this especial hotel :D Maybe one of the Enforcers could be an hypnotist that uses cigar smoke to put under his victims.
7/27/22, 6:15 AM
Phenomenal
7/3/22, 6:20 AM
Maybe it's just the gamer in me, but couldn't Carter just use the XP to buy back the mental stas and still have a bunch of points left? The triple refund means you could absolutely abuse this to hell and back in buffing up your character sheet.

7/5/22, 1:41 AM
@SageKepler He certainly could (and I have notes on this for the next chapter), but powergaming is going to get harder for Carter as his mental stats go down and carnal temptations go up! It's easy to rationalize spending those points on fun things when more triple XP is coming eventually.

7/5/22, 8:32 AM
@bluesuedewho I think Carter could buy back the stats he lost and still has leftover XP for whatever else he wants to buy, in that way he could indeed stall the loss of his primary Intelligence stat and still get other stats. If it works like duping his Exp, then he could just play the part of becoming dumber while buying more stuff from the duplication glitch.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:02 PM
@ChronoSeth I like that idea. Tricking Rusty while playing his game

7/27/22, 6:00 AM
@SageKepler to get around that, Rusty could also just order submissive Carter to unwillingly spend his xp on attributes
Jul 20, 2022
7/27/22, 5:46 AM
Seriously can't get enough of this story... Not usually into gainer or feeder stuff but this is sensational. What have you awakened?! Hahaha
7/27/22, 5:24 AM
Man, I'm on the edge of my seat! Seeing the mental transformation that takes place, it's clear that he wins and drinks the boiling gold stuff, given the kind of man he becomes. I wonder if his intentions up until then are pure, but after the mental transformation he reneges and betrays his friends, or even subjugates them himself? 🤔