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Jaberjaw373
7/26/22, 7:18 PM
This is probably dead but please continue this story. It's so fucking hot and I keep coming back to it
7/26/22, 2:14 PM
Ooh that was worth the wait! Love that Russell is having the time of his life πŸ₯΅

7/26/22, 7:04 PM
@Jdog think you mean Marcus in this story lol
7/25/22, 3:50 PM
I was enthralled by this story, almost hypnotized and wanting to read more. Cant waith to follow Daveys journey

7/26/22, 6:49 AM
@OKCcadMan Thank you for your kind words. Chapter two is now completed but I need to do my proof reading and plan to submit it tonight after work - so watch this space

7/26/22, 6:33 PM
@Whitechap_e16 I cant wait!
7/26/22, 6:07 PM
Just as a opinion isn't better make a new seaseon apart of the seaseon 1? Just for don't mix the stories
Anonymous
7/26/22, 5:55 PM
I check back every day for the next chapter :) can't wait to see Carter lose more intelligence, more sexual attributes getting leveled up (carter's ass/"love nut"/ass hunger, going "beyond human limits," all while making Carter beg for it all), more obedience commands, and dusty slowly taking over *drool emoji x 3* truly, such an amazing piece of work from bluesuede (as always)
7/26/22, 5:45 PM
Wooooooowww This is perfect. >///<
7/26/22, 3:02 AM
You do a great thing of building anticipation as all the different gods visit these young guys, while also making the eventual outcome feel natural and inescapable! Thanks for another amazing, lore-rich hot-as-hell chapter!

7/26/22, 4:58 PM
@time.to.occur Yeah, one of my favourite parts of this chapter was writing the gradual realisation, and I felt like the climax at the end was singularly fitting to Talley's final conclusion. And, yeah, this definitely had the densest lore of the bunch! It was great fun putting it all together.
7/26/22, 4:23 PM
Really loved the progression of how his mind slipped and his body changed to the suggestions of the anthro! I love a slow burn like that and the descriptions were phenomenal. I don’t know if you took inspiration or if you read Nex Anima Canis’ story before but it had a vibe similar to his old stories settled in school (that’s a big compliment!). Loved the corruption aspect of the transformation and the details of how big he was changing and growing! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

7/26/22, 4:34 PM
@Bigger Thanks for the compliment! I absolutely took inspiration from NAC's Knothole High series, as well as jockedguy's [I Saw This Bro](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/1471056) series. In a way this story is like a fusion of both of those ideas, but I tried to take it a step farther in this case by intentionally making the outcome a bit darker. I did like how KH improved all of its main characters in one way or another by making them happier, more confident, etc etc. And while I enjoy that a lot, I wanted to intentionally turn the main character into a bully instead of just a himbo dogboy. So this was a lot of fun. Thank you again for the support! Have a good one.
7/26/22, 3:16 PM
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7/26/22, 2:17 PM
Ooh that was hot!! Love that Russell is having the time of his life πŸ₯΅