Recent Comments

7/26/22, 3:02 AM
You do a great thing of building anticipation as all the different gods visit these young guys, while also making the eventual outcome feel natural and inescapable! Thanks for another amazing, lore-rich hot-as-hell chapter!

7/26/22, 4:58 PM
@time.to.occur Yeah, one of my favourite parts of this chapter was writing the gradual realisation, and I felt like the climax at the end was singularly fitting to Talley's final conclusion. And, yeah, this definitely had the densest lore of the bunch! It was great fun putting it all together.
7/26/22, 4:23 PM
Really loved the progression of how his mind slipped and his body changed to the suggestions of the anthro! I love a slow burn like that and the descriptions were phenomenal. I don’t know if you took inspiration or if you read Nex Anima Canis’ story before but it had a vibe similar to his old stories settled in school (that’s a big compliment!). Loved the corruption aspect of the transformation and the details of how big he was changing and growing! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

7/26/22, 4:34 PM
@Bigger Thanks for the compliment! I absolutely took inspiration from NAC's Knothole High series, as well as jockedguy's [I Saw This Bro](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/1471056) series. In a way this story is like a fusion of both of those ideas, but I tried to take it a step farther in this case by intentionally making the outcome a bit darker. I did like how KH improved all of its main characters in one way or another by making them happier, more confident, etc etc. And while I enjoy that a lot, I wanted to intentionally turn the main character into a bully instead of just a himbo dogboy. So this was a lot of fun. Thank you again for the support! Have a good one.
7/26/22, 3:16 PM
Interesting to see how it could be turned into a film or TV Series 😉🤔💡🤫🤭🤗🤐🙊👍👏🎆🎇📺📽️🎥🎞️🎬🎭🖨️⌨️💻💰🔏🤯😎🤑✍️🏋️👴 💒💍🛫🗼🥂✍️👷🛠️💈✂️💇‍♂️💪skinhead punk cigar Smoking vulgar Mussel construction workers Delivery guy Doctor being corrupted Larry can be turned into so many things with many corrupting vices & swearing And what could Zack & Jonathan become? I like the flip/flop of personalities,so many choices How about 2 religious guys selling converting that knocked at Pryors door what they can do for him & the guys & what can happen to them & what they can be corrupted to " Get Busy, You Have A Career Ahead Of You, & You're Welcome!
7/26/22, 2:17 PM
Ooh that was hot!! Love that Russell is having the time of his life 🥵
Gasuda
7/26/22, 6:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

7/26/22, 1:41 PM
@Gasuda This is such high praise! There’s little I love more than drawing readers in to real characters and an immersive world. I’m glad it pulled you on, and I hope to keep accomplishing the same thing. I don’t have any military experience, but I have a good sense for the vibe that draws people into the idea. I hate it as a concept in the real world, but as a set piece for kink for someone who adores sadism/masochism, it’s perfect. I’m looking forward to diving more into the kinkified military in some Collar stories. I ended up getting third place, which I’m super proud of! Thanks for reading and commenting—I live off of this kind of feedback.
7/26/22, 8:01 AM
Omg dude I’m loving this so far! Me and my cock cant wait for the rest of he series to be released ;)

7/26/22, 8:03 AM
Here’s hoping that they don’t get out safe and sound and that we get an epilogue of them getting in an orgy 20 years from now still as sex slaves 🥵@Jdog

7/26/22, 12:46 PM
@Jdog wait and see ;)

7/26/22, 1:24 PM
Ooh I will 🥵 @GoonNoob
7/26/22, 9:05 AM
You truly are a master at writing humiliation. It’s incredible really. Looking forward to more.

7/26/22, 11:28 AM
Thank you @Mrdick, there's only more humiliation to come ;)
7/26/22, 3:48 AM
This is so inventive, even in the second chapter. I love the rapid descent into horny madness, and I need fan art of this village so bad.

7/26/22, 11:26 AM
@Gay Chaste me too!
7/25/22, 7:34 AM
As soon as I saw the authors name I knew this was going to be a great story and I was not wrong - yes slow start but if your other stories are anything to go by, I know this is going to be another classic . So I look forward to new chapters being posted - thanks

7/26/22, 6:53 AM
@MalSkin Thanks mate. Your kindness means a lot to me because when I first started writing on this site I got beef for my spelling mistakes and inelegant grammar, your encouragement kept me writing. So I feel a bit like Davy when getting a compliment from his guvnor. Respect, BoSS, respect!
7/26/22, 5:43 AM
Great story! Loved when the dad started losing control. Loved the milk feeding and the reunion between dad and son. Looking forward to more!