Following along with bated breath!

Nice

An interesting story, waiting for the next chapter! Maybe some hot next door family should be joined the story too.

I love your style and I'm eager to see more work from you here. Both of your pieces fit in well with the themes of the sites, your writing is great and the approach is so hot. The bullying wasn't favoured by me either but it very starkly showed how much he was being changed by Dyl. Even if the bullying was just in his head, a memory that wasn't real but informed his new jock powerful-canine self. I am telling myself that his old friends aren't to be trusted either. Little troublemakers, the lot of them. I am sure they'll get detention themselves soon so won't have a chance to experience any actual bullying from him. A totally different personality as well as body. His mind slowed down. The way that was done, by telling him things like how he'd been in detention before because he'd cheated on the test because he's a bit slow like many of his kind. That was awesome. I got the feeling Dyl was trying to pull the right levers and push the right buttons to get Anthony to emerge. Given his comment at the end about finally having it happen it was like he was frustrated with the resistance or difficulty but in the end he won. Almost like they were playing a game of chess with our main character throwing up defenses and pawns and Dyl taking his pieces a different route until... Checkmate. The mind and body transformation totally out of the main character's control was so good. It's also got a great background worldbuilding going on. Questions and potential for the universe. The principal who I suspected at the start was actually the same principal but with a new coat of paint and brain - But we don't have any evidence of whether he's just a regular replacement and the instigator of all this canine takeover or if Dyl was behind it all and got to the head of the school first to smooth the path. The ability for Dyl to change fellow students into different fellow students. This has a (less scary, more hot) feel of the teen movies where aliens take over the school via body control or copying or whatever. I like this version much better. Especially the subtlety of the detention method. Good students convinced it's a mistake, showing up to sort it out and then losing themselves. Will the remaining humans be able to avoid becoming like the others. A life of a canine subservience to Dyl? Let's hope not.

So so so hot and seductive. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Loved this story. Please write the second chapter!

“Aw, are you boys going to sperm?“ I don’t even know what to say. The creativity and absolute depravity of this plant, and the way they were transformed into chaste sex dolls…balls as big as grapefruits and pumpkins…it’s so good and so horny.

Wasnt the nipple flowers something Trevor did to himself and then the chief just repeated it on Connor? Or was it always a ritual for conquered champions?

Le gasp. New season!!!!

Very hot story! enjoyed it a lot.