Recent Comments

7/25/22, 6:21 PM
Aaaaa I can't believe it took me so long to read this! It was as beautiful and heartwrenching as I expected. I could feel Clement's pain as I watched Andrew in the club with Brian. The flashbacks you used were just perfect, always right on time, and slowly building up Andrew's past and what led to his feelings today. It pained me that Andrew couldn't vocalise what the actual reasons were that he wouldn't open up, wouldn't share. I also thought that you did a _very_ good job of making this a "lived-in" world as a friend once said to me. You take a bit of time to explain how merging works; you explain some of the consequences—and I can immediately predict how Sergio actually feels about Brian, and suspect that Sergio really dislikes Brian but is stuck with him as with an abuser. (I also have a general preference for transformations like this that are only temporary, so you can build a real, sensible world around them. So that was extra fun.) All in all, awesome worldbuilding, exceptional story, beautiful character development. A smashing addition to Cupid.
7/25/22, 5:09 PM
Sexy addition. Really liked Connor rimming, hope he comes to find a passion in it, hehe. Trevor is super cool as well, hope he stays a good friend. I'm not against Dr Wilt having a 'bad end' though I think piss slave is less, hmm, not sure, and him being fucked into liked mental nothingness would be better. But that is just me. haha Good story though. Like Is aid I like both Connor and Trevor. Looking forward to seeing what happens later. I still hope Connor gets his cock back. That and his mouth. Him going gay would be better than him leaving straight.
Oct 28, 2012
7/25/22, 4:35 PM
I really liked it. I’m sorry the first comment was mean and that the author stopped. I had hoped to see the story unfold. The character development was in place and solid.
7/25/22, 3:17 PM
excited for the next chapter. I'm really looking forward to the development of Hank's Story
7/25/22, 2:09 PM
Wowza! The mystic lodge certainly promises a good time... 😏
7/25/22, 3:02 AM
Fantastic slow burn until Patrick finally snaps and the touch about him creating his own rules of enslavement was fantastic. Great job!

7/25/22, 10:48 AM
@Essex Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Alex
7/25/22, 5:00 AM
Love the work, great pacing, can’t wait for chapter 2!

7/25/22, 7:00 AM
@Alex Very kind. I was a bit worried that the pace was too slow as I set the scene, you show great patience, discernment and sophistication! The next chapter will speed things up a bit
sexcrab
7/25/22, 3:22 AM
Sincerely I was I bit disappointed that Dynamite would not be the central target of hypnosis. But the potential this story is giving is great. Chapter 2 please.

7/25/22, 6:58 AM
@sexcrab This chapter was a bit of a slow burn the pace will increase in the next. I've got plans for Dynamite but he doesn't figure much at the start
7/24/22, 10:01 PM
Fun first chapter! You always have such a distinctive prose style, full of colorful colloquialisms; it's a pleasure to read your stories.

7/25/22, 6:56 AM
@Hypnothrill Cheers, it's great to get nice comments from a distinguished author. I just write in the language we speak in my part of London, avoiding Rhyming of course as that would confuse the audience!
7/24/22, 7:10 PM
Aaaaaaaaaaaah! Poor Davy,he will have so much fun! Let's see if DI Dynamite will get in on this one day

7/25/22, 6:53 AM
@ForgottenCradle Many thanks for the kind words. I'm planning to take Davy on a journey that he will never forget (or perhaps never remember), and with economical spirit I never let a good character go to waste