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Oct 28, 2012
7/25/22, 4:35 PM
I really liked it. I’m sorry the first comment was mean and that the author stopped. I had hoped to see the story unfold. The character development was in place and solid.
7/25/22, 3:17 PM
excited for the next chapter. I'm really looking forward to the development of Hank's Story
7/25/22, 2:09 PM
Wowza! The mystic lodge certainly promises a good time... 😏
7/25/22, 3:02 AM
Fantastic slow burn until Patrick finally snaps and the touch about him creating his own rules of enslavement was fantastic. Great job!

7/25/22, 10:48 AM
@Essex Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Alex
7/25/22, 5:00 AM
Love the work, great pacing, can’t wait for chapter 2!

7/25/22, 7:00 AM
@Alex Very kind. I was a bit worried that the pace was too slow as I set the scene, you show great patience, discernment and sophistication! The next chapter will speed things up a bit
sexcrab
7/25/22, 3:22 AM
Sincerely I was I bit disappointed that Dynamite would not be the central target of hypnosis. But the potential this story is giving is great. Chapter 2 please.

7/25/22, 6:58 AM
@sexcrab This chapter was a bit of a slow burn the pace will increase in the next. I've got plans for Dynamite but he doesn't figure much at the start
7/24/22, 10:01 PM
Fun first chapter! You always have such a distinctive prose style, full of colorful colloquialisms; it's a pleasure to read your stories.

7/25/22, 6:56 AM
@Hypnothrill Cheers, it's great to get nice comments from a distinguished author. I just write in the language we speak in my part of London, avoiding Rhyming of course as that would confuse the audience!
7/24/22, 7:10 PM
Aaaaaaaaaaaah! Poor Davy,he will have so much fun! Let's see if DI Dynamite will get in on this one day

7/25/22, 6:53 AM
@ForgottenCradle Many thanks for the kind words. I'm planning to take Davy on a journey that he will never forget (or perhaps never remember), and with economical spirit I never let a good character go to waste
7/25/22, 4:29 AM
Oooh, fantastic! I love that, unlike the alien Signal, this villain has more of a personal motivation beyond simple conquest: it wants revenge against those who have hurt it. The hypnotics and parasitic invasion make it extra hot. Can’t wait to see how this unfolds!
Anonymous
7/25/22, 3:43 AM
I have a guess at which hypnothrill story youre referring to ;) but even if im wrong its always a fun time to read your stories!