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7/23/22, 9:23 PM
Awesome story, great changes. Anymore coming?
7/23/22, 5:52 PM
Has he found someone he wants to keep around? He will need to make sure the 'youngin' doesn't go anywhere.
7/23/22, 4:53 PM
I hope that you keep going with this. I'm really enjoying it so far and want to see where it goes.
7/23/22, 4:31 PM
Fun chapter. Nice to start the brother on the path of being a good boy and hope he does the same to his father. You know if the brother doesn't need the job he can be their subby house boy. I wonder the nature of what the ring could do. I wonder if it can have broader, wider more worldly effects. Anyway thus was fun!
7/23/22, 4:28 PM
This was hot. The rimming especially. I wish Felix didn't have a micro penius or whatever, give the need a nice cock. Maybe have the father help him get his sons friends to be the needs good boy. Haha But seriously this was hot. The rimming was fantastic.
7/22/22, 1:20 AM
This story has made me cum twice so far. Can't say for sure I wouldn't sign up to be a candidate for this experiment. Eagerly awaiting another installment. Maybe include a little more description of his balls & scrotum shrinking? There are sooooo many stories on here where guys have their cocks shrunken to the point of disappearing and then the become female; I'd love to NOT have this turn into one of those. You could have the nanobots malfunction in some way; perhaps after giving Evan a micropenis, they just sort of overload and stop? What if the nanobots got into Evan's cum and the top found himself shrinking after his next session with Evan? Lots of possibilities. Please keep the story going.

7/22/22, 3:02 AM
@SeamusTX thanks so much! I’m so glad you are enjoying it. Yes, I’m also not into feminization and want to leave them with a little something haha. I will try more to include descriptions of their balls and scrotum, I totally neglected them haha. Thanks again!
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7/23/22, 2:24 PM
Father and son, please!
7/23/22, 9:40 AM
Oh my god. This story is so hot. Can't wait to see what happens in part 2.

7/23/22, 1:53 PM
@Hyp-fet Don’t worry, Cole is going to help some guys “enjoy” the uniform…
7/23/22, 5:38 AM
Damn! There's so much to love here! I really hope you decide to write more of this story and the consequences of this for the members of the expedition!

7/23/22, 11:46 AM
@time.to.occur I have 4 chapters ready to go. I was in the middle of my last story but I was so turned on by what I was writing I couldn't help it XD
7/22/22, 11:19 PM
This is one of the hottest fucking stories I’ve read in a long time, and I can promise you I’ll come back to it over and over again, not least because of the huge werewolf dick, nor least because it does cum inflation incredibly well and that’s literally my favourite kink. And the details! The visceral details—I take pride in my detailed prose but this vividness I can only learn from. I came… way too quickly; I’ll take a few sessions to get through this baby properly, I’m sure of it. You’ve earned yourself a fast fan.

7/22/22, 11:34 PM
@Soren Fitz Hey there! Thanks for the high praise. It really means a lot. I’m one of those people who tends to be really self-critical about my work, so it means a lot to hear that I’ve got some skill. Not sure when my next stories will be coming out, but I’ll try to make them just as vivid and detailed as this one. Did you have any favorite lines or quotes, just out of curiosity?

7/22/22, 11:47 PM
@octavian I was particularly pleased by the kiss—I thought it was exceptionally visceral, and the paragraph just after that when anon’s hair spills down their forehead shows an impressive awareness of the sensory experience of your character, and it’s about that time that I said “okay, I’ve got to do a real close read and absorb some of these skills by osmosis.” I swear there was a moment when I said “okay I’ve got to steal that line” but I can’t quite catch it now. And I feel you on the self-criticality. When I first started writing for this site I was in desperate need of comments like the one I just wrote, lmao. The more you experience this kind of affirmation the easier it will become to affirm yourself. And sometimes you just go back and read when someone you respect as a fellow author or someone you trust as a good reader gives you a comment that makes you feel proud of your own work. I trust you’ll get lots of those. Did you bring this from somewhere else, or is this quite fresh as a work?

7/23/22, 12:45 AM
@Soren Fitz Believe it or not, I actually wrote this story a few months back. I didn't post it here because I didn't know if such a furry-centric piece would receive a good reception or even be allowed at all. To be honest, I had only been on Gay Spiral for years without even knowing the other sites existed until yesterday when I published my previous story. I started working on that story, Troublemaker, around the start of this month, actually. And yeah, when it came to the kiss and the other highly detailed parts, usually my methodology is to just start out writing the most bare-bones story. I have a basic outline for everything I write. Every time I return to continue the story, I start from the beginning and edit what I previously wrote. I use the momentum and the motivation from doing that to continue writing new content, and gradually I might stop adhering to the outline as much and come up with something hotter on the fly. So usually it might start out as a basic "He kissed me" but then it gradually evolves into what you read. Then it all gets edited, cleaned up, and once the story is done I send it to friends for their thoughts.

7/23/22, 9:16 AM
Yeah, we’re really trying to work on getting people interested in Kinky (and to a lesser extent the other sites). Glad to see you join the fray. I appreciate that method of writing a lot. It’s a hard-earned skill to just… skip a line and tell yourself you’ll write it later. It goes against my own impulses, but it’s very valuable at times. Funny enough, the extent to which I entwine sex and plot/character/emotional development sometimes bites me in the ass because sometimes I just want to write the story surrounding sex. But I’m slowly mastering the art of writing “[write this later]” or “[describe the pleasure here more sensually]” Good on you! @octavian