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7/21/22, 5:40 PM
Not into the furry elements, but when I tried to ignore them, I thought this was a well-done jock transformation story.

7/23/22, 12:48 AM
@Hypnothrill Glad you found something to enjoy, even if it wasn't your cup of tea. Thanks for reading!
7/22/22, 11:36 PM
Interesting story and world set up going on here. The breeding was hot, as is his like mind fuck thanks to it. I liked the description of pup types. Maybe I can find a subby bottom werewolf pup who needs pounding. Hehe But yeah sexy story. Well written and totally fun. Nice job.

7/23/22, 12:46 AM
@Heru Kane Who knows, maybe there are a select few canines who'll bend over for the right guy! It's all about getting lucky, eh? Thanks for reading and for the positive support. Have a good one!
7/23/22, 12:03 AM
Another outstanding story from Baralai. I can't say how many times I've reread pretty much every single one of your works. Excellent stuff, as always.
7/22/22, 5:20 PM
I'm assuming that they mind wipe the men when they finish their sentences? This is if they are actually allowed to leave. In the US the 8th Amendment prohibits cruel and unusual punishment. There's no way any men who were allowed to leave would not tell the news media. This is why I'm guessing they mind wipe them.

7/22/22, 7:55 PM
@Cutlerfan Oh I was just assuming that somehow the ones that go here never get released. Fraudulent reports of bad behavior, accidents etc.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:31 PM
@Cutlerfan While this isn't the U.S. you are right that it would be inevitable that word would get out when prisoners are released without some sort of intervention. There are a number of ways to deal with that. Mindwiping is, indeed, one option at their disposal. But, it isn't the only one.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:36 PM
@Nocturne13 You have pointed out another possibility as to how the knowledge of what happens in these private prison ships - who need fuel for an advantage in their trading - can hold on to prisoners or stop the truth of their experience finding the light of day. In Phil's case, though. I wonder what you think would happen when the year of his sentence is up. This experience has definitely changed him and only in a few days. What would a year be like? Would he want to leave? Would the sentence being up be something dreaded rather than anticipated? He's an amp now and knows what that is like. Would he want to go back to being a man in the world with all the troubles and pressures that entails? Not to mention the lack of regular heights of pleasure on a near daily basis.
7/22/22, 3:15 PM
Holy shit that was incredibly hot! The arc of the scene was really well drawn, from resisting to submitting, each stage was super hot

Evan
7/22/22, 11:28 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thank you! Thank you, too, for commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that it perhaps pushed some of your buttons.
7/22/22, 2:30 PM
What I especially love about this story is how inexorable all the other characters know that it is, and how Phil seems to find that fascinating. I love Cho for his firm kindness and Cortez for how he contrasts that. My favourite line from Cortez is him sadistically declaring his love for bathtime while he sprays them down. And then there's the lore!!! I love the language you've chosen -- battery pack, amp, and so on, and how much it evokes. I would love to read more stories set in this universe! Thank you so much!

Evan
7/22/22, 11:27 PM
@time.to.occur Thank you. Your encouragement and kindness helped make this a finished story and far more polished than it ever would have been. I think Phil, like all of them at one point, were fascinated by the expectation of the inexorable nature of it. That the others had to put effort in to remember his point of view, being new to it all. Every new arrival probably finds that strange. Every new arrival believes that the cellmates are all wrong. They will be the exception. They'll put up with what they must and be on their way unchanged. They are always wrong. I enjoy the bath time line too. It's when we see Cortez at his happiest, I think. If I write more stories in this universe, then I promise to share.
7/22/22, 10:37 PM
In my personal opinion, it would be interesting to define a definitive style and not have to read two versions or modified versions of the previous ones.

7/22/22, 11:23 PM
@Maxigay I can understand this. I grew up in the 80's and a big style of book I read growing up were these small "choose your own adventure" style of book and at the end of a page it would say Go to Page # to do this... or page # to do that. This is something like that. What I can tell you though is that if you picture this as a flow chart, everything from 1 is going to be "willing" and everything derived from 2 is forced, the further you go "to the right" will be more forced and vice versa. So higher letters are more forced, A and B more willing. I hope you've been able to enjoy the story either way and thank you for the feedback.
7/22/22, 8:23 PM
Finally getting around to this series! I enjoyed chapter 1 — very hot, and great worldbuilding. You’ve got a good knack for putting the reader in the sensory experience of the characters, which I really respond positively to. I look forward to seeing what’s up with the prince, as well as seeing how you work Talley into the story. I am curious though. How do Seeded guys get anything done, like, say, studying and keeping up their grades, when they’re constantly in heat?

7/22/22, 11:04 PM
Thanks for reading! I’m glad the prose is really helping you dive into the character experience. That was a big thing I wanted to get done in this story, which highlights the sexual powers so much. Seeded guys are not in heat constantly—heats rise and fall, and also build in intensity over time. Additionally, post nut clarity is extra powerful when you’re pregnant, no time more so than right after a heat is satisfied or a contraction completes, so you can get high levels of productivity. And as it happens, although it seems counterintuitive, you soak up knowledge from a teacher when you’re having sex in the classroom… at least, those are all the solutions I’ve posed to myself. Maybe we’ll have to brainstorm some time about the best ones. @Noam de Pluma
7/22/22, 6:12 PM
Ooh, what a fantastic tale! Ever since I read dear absman’s “Pollination,” I’ve been fascinated by fellating flowers. :p The descriptions are red-hot, and the idea of being reduced to a brainless zombie via orgasming is a phenomenal idea. And I’ll bet you a pizza that this Amazonian tribe is the same one that featured at the end of the last story! :D Love how you weave your universe together. :)

7/22/22, 11:00 PM
@Feed Your Head I owe you a pizza :)
7/22/22, 9:53 PM
Damn, very nice story… I can feel the pull…

7/22/22, 10:28 PM
@HudsonUK2 Thanks! The Spiral definitely has a way of making you crave that uniform…