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7/22/22, 5:37 PM
Great start! Bottom daddies are the best 👏👏👏 Can't wait for more
7/21/22, 8:06 AM
This series is so good! Pete is just iconic. :grin: This story is just so clever. You have all the classic motifs of the fairytales, but presented in a new way. Phenomenal stuff!

7/22/22, 5:21 PM
@Norismo High praise coming from you, Norismo! And that you like Pete is definitely the highest praise indeed, as you inspired me to create him.
7/22/22, 8:07 AM
Another fantastic chapter! Here's to hoping the family just keeps growing!

7/22/22, 5:17 PM
@Norismo Thank you Norismo-chan! I can definitely promise that at the very least. Thank you for reading!
7/22/22, 3:37 PM
This is a really exciting first chapter. I’m waiting a second chapter with baited breath. If I had one comment for the author, it would be that there’s a lot of “telling” in the chapter, and not as much “showing.” In other words, we are told directly about the Thyjar and what it does, rather than experiencing it from the point of view of the characters, which can sometimes be a little more effective. Can’t wait for chapter 2!

7/22/22, 5:00 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thanks for the comment! I totally agree with what you are saying. This chapter turned into more of a narrative prelude than I had intended. Chapter 2 is just waiting for validation and I'd like to think that the balance is far better there! As things progress we should be getting further away from abstract description. Thanks again for the support 😄
7/22/22, 4:31 PM
Nice start, fun elements. Love the Booty Flower element. Also LOVE the whole gapping hole kept open thanks to the pressure/pleasure they feel as they get pulled away and escorted. There is something sexy of a nicely, but not too vastly, gapped hole! Also blissed out faces is super hot. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Hope for some more rimming, hehe, and also one of them or the first expedition coming out ahead.
Oct 30, 2021
7/22/22, 12:00 PM
I've read this story several times over the years and truly enjoy it. Everything about it is so wonderful and I am glad I found it again. I so enjoy and appreciate your writing. Thank you. 🐻

7/22/22, 4:28 PM
@Thom Thank you, if you want more new Werebear TF goodness, read https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10004420 Graham and I have been turning this RP into a story.
7/22/22, 1:14 PM
Really like where this is going. The new additions are perfect,Lou might be my new favorite now
7/22/22, 12:28 PM
So far it has been a great story :D Hope you will continue it.
7/22/22, 12:00 PM
Another awesome story. My guess is that Marcus did not take the antidote. I know I wouldn’t. I’m also hoping Darius still has some Q weed left over back at the old apartment - just for fun!
Zai
7/22/22, 11:44 AM
Great story, dude!! You've taken the original author's excellent work and ran with it, keeping the original canon feel, but putting your own amazing original spin into the tale. I look forward to: more Brody getting split open, spit-roasted, rammed, rimmed, choked on cock, etc, by the varied men fortunate enough to be... blessed by fate to own this jock whore, slutty bitch, pretty boi, cum guzzling bottom Greek God. Even if only for a brief time. One huge wish? Please, as soon as you can (if it's what you plotted), have that Asian studly hunk Tyler completely bitch, claim and own Hank's hot, white, sexy, ass and mouth and mind! That white daddy stud needs to be taught the way to please his new Asian master. Thanks and good luck with your writing!