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7/22/22, 8:07 AM
Another fantastic chapter! Here's to hoping the family just keeps growing!

7/22/22, 5:17 PM
@Norismo Thank you Norismo-chan! I can definitely promise that at the very least. Thank you for reading!
7/22/22, 3:37 PM
This is a really exciting first chapter. I’m waiting a second chapter with baited breath. If I had one comment for the author, it would be that there’s a lot of “telling” in the chapter, and not as much “showing.” In other words, we are told directly about the Thyjar and what it does, rather than experiencing it from the point of view of the characters, which can sometimes be a little more effective. Can’t wait for chapter 2!

7/22/22, 5:00 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thanks for the comment! I totally agree with what you are saying. This chapter turned into more of a narrative prelude than I had intended. Chapter 2 is just waiting for validation and I'd like to think that the balance is far better there! As things progress we should be getting further away from abstract description. Thanks again for the support 😄
7/22/22, 4:31 PM
Nice start, fun elements. Love the Booty Flower element. Also LOVE the whole gapping hole kept open thanks to the pressure/pleasure they feel as they get pulled away and escorted. There is something sexy of a nicely, but not too vastly, gapped hole! Also blissed out faces is super hot. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Hope for some more rimming, hehe, and also one of them or the first expedition coming out ahead.
Oct 30, 2021
7/22/22, 12:00 PM
I've read this story several times over the years and truly enjoy it. Everything about it is so wonderful and I am glad I found it again. I so enjoy and appreciate your writing. Thank you. 🐻

7/22/22, 4:28 PM
@Thom Thank you, if you want more new Werebear TF goodness, read https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10004420 Graham and I have been turning this RP into a story.
7/22/22, 1:14 PM
Really like where this is going. The new additions are perfect,Lou might be my new favorite now
7/22/22, 12:28 PM
So far it has been a great story :D Hope you will continue it.
7/22/22, 12:00 PM
Another awesome story. My guess is that Marcus did not take the antidote. I know I wouldn’t. I’m also hoping Darius still has some Q weed left over back at the old apartment - just for fun!
Zai
7/22/22, 11:44 AM
Great story, dude!! You've taken the original author's excellent work and ran with it, keeping the original canon feel, but putting your own amazing original spin into the tale. I look forward to: more Brody getting split open, spit-roasted, rammed, rimmed, choked on cock, etc, by the varied men fortunate enough to be... blessed by fate to own this jock whore, slutty bitch, pretty boi, cum guzzling bottom Greek God. Even if only for a brief time. One huge wish? Please, as soon as you can (if it's what you plotted), have that Asian studly hunk Tyler completely bitch, claim and own Hank's hot, white, sexy, ass and mouth and mind! That white daddy stud needs to be taught the way to please his new Asian master. Thanks and good luck with your writing!
Anonymous
7/22/22, 10:58 AM
This was amazing :heart:
Evan
7/22/22, 10:15 AM
Magnificent final chapter and another brilliant series. Hit after hit, GoonNoob. The first part was super hot with all the fun of being out of control and tension. Plus opening up some of those pure tops to more. The second part was beautiful with another tie-in to another story series and ending with two romances. I was so hoping Lee and Drake would be able to be reunited and together. So sweet. Lee being replaced as a slave was bad enough, but being forced to separate from Drake was heartbreaking. The acknowledgment of our main trio's relationship not being based on having a bottom any more but genuine feelings and care was lovely too. I always am in awe of how you can have the most non-consensual mind fuckery and be hot as hell but wind in such wonderful characters and romances. I love the poly aspect too. So sex positive. Can't wait for your next series.