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7/21/22, 4:52 PM
Preppification stories rule.

7/21/22, 5:04 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk They do! Stay tuned for part 2 where the uniform starts spreading.

7/22/22, 3:36 AM
@jockboy51oh fuck! I can't wait
Anonymous
7/22/22, 3:20 AM
I am loving this story so far! Please keep it up!!! <3
Anonymous
7/22/22, 1:18 AM
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7/22/22, 1:22 AM
@RC_Willy Glad to see you're a corduroy lover! You still wear them at all? That would definitely please the Spiral ;)

7/22/22, 1:31 AM
@RC_Willy Aw yeah nice! Feel free to PM me on the forum if you want to talk more about it
Anonymous
7/22/22, 12:40 AM
between us did marcus take the antidote? I need to know please tell us!

7/22/22, 12:52 AM
@ *wink*

Anonymous
7/22/22, 1:14 AM
@GoonNoob i'll take that as a yes and even with the brainwashing gone he was still in love with his best bros

7/22/22, 1:16 AM
@ oh is that what you think... *takes a long drag of a cigarette XD
7/21/22, 11:48 PM
Great conclusion down to the "1", loved it! Looking forward to seeing one shots in this universe. Great job!
7/21/22, 11:48 PM
man what a series, so damn HOT!
7/21/22, 9:04 AM
Fantastic work on this story Goon Noob. Loved the ending, the villain got his comeuppance and the throuple have a happy and fulfilling future ahead of them. I heartily agree with everything Feed Your Head said about choice and consent. The stories and scenes I enjoy the most are those where all parties are consenting, even when it involves control or hypnosis. I would be thrilled to see Drake and Lee star in their own future title. I think the locked boyfriends dynamic would be interesting to explore further, especially because I get the feeling they are going to become a pair of dominant power bottoms in their future adventures to find a top to satiate them.

7/21/22, 11:33 PM
@phillipsm glad you've enjoyed it! I enjoy writing sex scenes which are between loving partners (even with hypnosis) but I also like the rough, morally dubious stuff as well, so you get 2-4-1 in my stories. I'd love to write about them two, though I'm not sure how a story about them would fit into a GSS format. I can't see them manipulating someone into being their top via hypno or the like, but maybe I could venture over into Gay Cupid Stories or Gay Kinky Stories for that.
7/21/22, 3:41 AM
I love when the villain gets their just deserts, and this is the perfect punishment. Also, your introduction of a strong female character who helps save the day is a great bonus to these stories. And your emphasis on the power of CHOICE is the most important thing of all—ultimately, I’m fine with nearly every kink so long as everyone involved is a consenting adult who freely chooses to participate. Well done! :)

7/21/22, 11:27 PM
@Feed Your Head glad you enjoyed the ending! the final chapter is always the most nerve wracking to publish as it can spoil an entire story if people don't like it. I'd never have someone do something without consent, verbal or body language, but like everything on GSS and brain changing, consent is a loose idea XD
7/21/22, 9:47 AM
Let me say it this way: In twelve hours I have to submit an important assignment for law school, but when I saw you posted the final part I knew I have to read it first. As I suspected it was worth every second. The mid part cliff hanger was great, I could feel the distress of the boys and was wondering myself would can they possibly do. I very much like that you took a small detail form the previous chapter and used it as a clever Chekov's gun. The happy ending was just what I wanted and I'm super glad it ended this way! As for future stories, I think I would really like to read about Ted and how he got his company back. There aren't many stories of payback after mind-fuckery and this is a great premise for both erotica and plot. So I implore you to write about him. I am way too curious to know how this one last plot line ends. Maybe Ted will contact the muscle milk company again? We don't know much about them but I really would like to know more, especially since their slogan is "be the bull" which maybe implies that their protein shakes do the opposite effect. Whatever you chose to write about next, I can't wait to read your next story!

7/21/22, 11:24 PM
@Reader well i hope you still got your assignment submitted on time! I've been "told off" before for leaving my chapters on cliffhangers that leave the main characters in their darkest hour, and i've recieved alot of good feedback that I decided to combine the 2 parts into 1 chapter so no-one is left waiting for the resolution for a week. With Ted, I could see him being sceptical about special weed and antidote poppers and just think he got too high and drunk at the party. Maybe Paul could issue him something like "the 12 labours of hercules" where if he wants his shares back he has to do what he says. Maybe Paul took some of the Q weed spliffs with him...
7/21/22, 4:51 PM
This is the ending we all asked for. The villain gets punished, the good guys win, and there’s an orgy. Actually, several orgies. So it’s all good. Right? Right…? :frowning:

7/21/22, 11:14 PM
@Exh8bslut and they all lived happily ever after :)