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7/21/22, 3:41 AM
I love when the villain gets their just deserts, and this is the perfect punishment. Also, your introduction of a strong female character who helps save the day is a great bonus to these stories. And your emphasis on the power of CHOICE is the most important thing of all—ultimately, I’m fine with nearly every kink so long as everyone involved is a consenting adult who freely chooses to participate. Well done! :)

7/21/22, 11:27 PM
@Feed Your Head glad you enjoyed the ending! the final chapter is always the most nerve wracking to publish as it can spoil an entire story if people don't like it. I'd never have someone do something without consent, verbal or body language, but like everything on GSS and brain changing, consent is a loose idea XD
7/21/22, 9:47 AM
Let me say it this way: In twelve hours I have to submit an important assignment for law school, but when I saw you posted the final part I knew I have to read it first. As I suspected it was worth every second. The mid part cliff hanger was great, I could feel the distress of the boys and was wondering myself would can they possibly do. I very much like that you took a small detail form the previous chapter and used it as a clever Chekov's gun. The happy ending was just what I wanted and I'm super glad it ended this way! As for future stories, I think I would really like to read about Ted and how he got his company back. There aren't many stories of payback after mind-fuckery and this is a great premise for both erotica and plot. So I implore you to write about him. I am way too curious to know how this one last plot line ends. Maybe Ted will contact the muscle milk company again? We don't know much about them but I really would like to know more, especially since their slogan is "be the bull" which maybe implies that their protein shakes do the opposite effect. Whatever you chose to write about next, I can't wait to read your next story!

7/21/22, 11:24 PM
@Reader well i hope you still got your assignment submitted on time! I've been "told off" before for leaving my chapters on cliffhangers that leave the main characters in their darkest hour, and i've recieved alot of good feedback that I decided to combine the 2 parts into 1 chapter so no-one is left waiting for the resolution for a week. With Ted, I could see him being sceptical about special weed and antidote poppers and just think he got too high and drunk at the party. Maybe Paul could issue him something like "the 12 labours of hercules" where if he wants his shares back he has to do what he says. Maybe Paul took some of the Q weed spliffs with him...
7/21/22, 4:51 PM
This is the ending we all asked for. The villain gets punished, the good guys win, and there’s an orgy. Actually, several orgies. So it’s all good. Right? Right…? :frowning:

7/21/22, 11:14 PM
@Exh8bslut and they all lived happily ever after :)
7/21/22, 11:07 PM
Solid start!!! Can’t wait to see where it goes!!
7/21/22, 10:45 PM
Thanks @DuskSkullKing for another great story. I enjoyed the flow of and movement and didn't see the app backfiring as Arthur discovered it
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7/21/22, 8:04 PM
Great story!
7/21/22, 7:56 PM
Hot!!
7/21/22, 7:01 PM
Well I discussed this story with my now ex boyfriend 😒, ANYWAY 😅 he helped me figure out how to make a part 2 to this story. It’s currently up on my Patreon and will be made available to all tiers on July 22, 2022
7/21/22, 6:26 PM
Very Hot. Still feels close to the original I read when New Guy in Town proposed his take but improved in many ways.

7/21/22, 6:44 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thanks! I’m glad that’s what the general consensus seems to be as that was what I was aiming for.
7/21/22, 6:43 PM
So this was really hot, till the switch happened,why must there always be switches. Sigh. But yeah him turning his straight roomste into a subby good boy was getting really hot.