Recent Comments

7/21/22, 6:25 PM
Fun and sexy story. I like how the comeuppance was 'off screen' - I was worried there was going to be a battle and that would have ruined the vibe. haha Sexy story. The various events were sexually fun and also interesting plot wise.
7/21/22, 6:01 PM
SO HOT!!!!! This was so gooddddddd! You really have some of the best world-buiding on the site! And it was written a lot more consistently than the previous chapter, even with POV switches :).
Gingcub
7/21/22, 5:30 PM
Fucking love it! Would love to see him strapped down and milked so he goes all the way to a permanent nub on his last day 😈
Swizzington
7/21/22, 2:11 PM
What a pleasant surprise! This definitely stays true to the original version while still offering some noticeable improvements. Thanks for sharing.

7/21/22, 5:02 PM
@Swizzington Thanks! From your comment I take it that you had previously read the original?
7/21/22, 5:45 AM
Wow!! Definitely would like to read more of this! 🤩

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:02 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks, hopefully I'll have time to get on that soon.
7/21/22, 12:02 AM
ContInue?

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:01 PM
@Maxigay Yeah, possibly, I've got an idea for another part.
7/21/22, 3:16 PM
I like it, if you accept suggestions: make the coach fall in love with the drama teacher, and make the captains of the football and wrestling teams fall in love with each other, as for our main hero, why not give him his best friend
7/15/22, 9:52 PM
Thank you loved that this is a sequel to The Cordz as that was one of the stories that lead me to this site. Glad it continued as it just seemed to end randomly. Plus love nerd transformation don't think there is enough on here.

7/21/22, 2:27 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby This story actually inspired me to go back and do a rewrite of the original Cordz and I just posted it today! https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10004485
Anonymous
7/21/22, 2:15 PM
The part of controlling the general reminds me of a film.
7/21/22, 1:54 PM
Well done!!!