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7/21/22, 6:26 PM
Very Hot. Still feels close to the original I read when New Guy in Town proposed his take but improved in many ways.

7/21/22, 6:44 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thanks! I’m glad that’s what the general consensus seems to be as that was what I was aiming for.
7/21/22, 6:43 PM
So this was really hot, till the switch happened,why must there always be switches. Sigh. But yeah him turning his straight roomste into a subby good boy was getting really hot.
7/21/22, 6:29 PM
AMAZING! The onomatopoeia of the clothing was a particularly fantastic touch. There aren’t nearly enough preppification stories on here! You paint such a gorgeous picture of the visuals—the final image of Cole’s spiraling eyes in the mirror was incredibly hot. But what impressed, terrified, and turned me on the most was how *eager* Cole was to be converted. Seeing him go from absolutely against the idea to absolutely enthralled at being enslaved is a genius touch. Phenomenal work! :)

7/21/22, 6:38 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! I’m excited to rework the rest of the conversions from the original like some of the football players (the juxtaposition of some hunky football stud wearing the uniform is going to be pretty damn hot). I’m glad you enjoyed the eye spirals - I plan to have the character’s eyes start spiraling whenever the Spiral talks to them in their head.
7/21/22, 6:25 PM
Fun and sexy story. I like how the comeuppance was 'off screen' - I was worried there was going to be a battle and that would have ruined the vibe. haha Sexy story. The various events were sexually fun and also interesting plot wise.
7/21/22, 6:01 PM
SO HOT!!!!! This was so gooddddddd! You really have some of the best world-buiding on the site! And it was written a lot more consistently than the previous chapter, even with POV switches :).
Gingcub
7/21/22, 5:30 PM
Fucking love it! Would love to see him strapped down and milked so he goes all the way to a permanent nub on his last day 😈
Swizzington
7/21/22, 2:11 PM
What a pleasant surprise! This definitely stays true to the original version while still offering some noticeable improvements. Thanks for sharing.

7/21/22, 5:02 PM
@Swizzington Thanks! From your comment I take it that you had previously read the original?
7/21/22, 5:45 AM
Wow!! Definitely would like to read more of this! 🤩

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:02 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks, hopefully I'll have time to get on that soon.
7/21/22, 12:02 AM
ContInue?

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:01 PM
@Maxigay Yeah, possibly, I've got an idea for another part.
7/21/22, 3:16 PM
I like it, if you accept suggestions: make the coach fall in love with the drama teacher, and make the captains of the football and wrestling teams fall in love with each other, as for our main hero, why not give him his best friend