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7/21/22, 1:54 PM
Well done!!!
Elm
7/21/22, 1:25 PM
Great start! Love me some bottom daddies!
7/21/22, 11:18 AM
Very unique take on the Batman mythos! Super fun!
Jul 17, 2022
7/20/22, 7:45 PM
Love your artstyle and the slow, often subtle, progression of transformation. Can't say I've ever thought of weight gaining to be a kink but that's two stories of yours I've enjoy :)

7/21/22, 10:56 AM
@GoonNoob I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll take that as a big triumph that someone was able to enjoy a kink they didn't have :D
Evan
7/21/22, 9:40 AM
And so the conclusion. Some of the details wrong but the overall shape of the thing. Well done. I did fall for his actually having a conversation with the gardener. I found these last two chapters a little easier. Still wrecking balls to my emotions but having Sawyer no longer silent with the weight of his tragic death as the only voice remaining from him, instead his own voice lovingly trying to care for Lock after all this time. Called back. That gave a little breathing room. The perspectives of their youth remain sweet and wonderful. And I am so glad that Lovelace and Lock could develop a genuine friendship. Before I decided Lock was a spirit himself, I toyed with the idea that Sawyer was actually Lovelace visiting the memorial. And after that Sawyer wanted to tell Lock to seek our Lovelace (though that was before they were friendly in the story and it didn't really add up at the time.) The spanking scene was incredibly beautiful. Erotic but also so special. They shared that with the three of them. The care for each of them at the end by Sawyer. And even Lovelace helping with the care with the water. Very touching. The trust and love broke me. With hypnosis in the bedroom to help Lock face the truth. Lovelace showing up was very touching. Lock's mother's attitude towards Lock and Sawyer's "close friendship" was rather sweet too. It is still so sad that they never got to have a life together, that they were robbed of that but as a consolation, being together again was something wonderful and the final scene was sad but beautiful. That Sawyer was always close to keep him safe as they swam into the night together. Exceptionally done. You have a masterful talent for playing my emotions like an instrument.
Evan
7/21/22, 8:27 AM
It is so wonderful to have them talk uninterrupted and touch. So very sweet. I shall type through damp eyes. My suspicion is that Lock has succumbed to influenza or something. That the commotion of the staff was the discovery of his body on the floor, not just the ink. His lack of energy I sure hope doesn't mean he managed to actually write that letter in the physical world. Sawyer and Lock being exorcised when they finally have found one another again would be even more tragic. The wind, though, subconscious not being able to hear of his own mortality just yet? Lock again needing to be coaxed like a cat from beneath a bed rather than confronted with a truth he can't face immediately. Winding thoughts. The flashbacks are so beautiful. Their sweetness together, mischief and playfulness. And Lock wishing to know all of Sawyer is actually really interesting. A show of love to reach into that unknown place. I am grateful for some of their sweetness in the "present" day as well. What great characters. I really love Sawyer most of all. He certainly was ahead of his time and taken all too soon.
7/21/22, 6:20 AM
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Jul 20, 2022
7/21/22, 6:06 AM
Fucking amazing!
7/20/22, 8:04 PM
I love this story so much! I especially love the way that Talley gets talked into the situation, the very hot physical descriptions and attention to physicality! Very mysterious doings are afoot, too. This is such a lore-rich world with so many things that make me curious to know more and more!

7/21/22, 5:59 AM
@time.to.occur The way Riki talks Talley into it makes me want him so much, even though he's a character I wrote! As much as I love Talley, I think Riki is my favourite secondary character in this story, and I definitely plan to write more of him and Talley, or even some Riki standalones.
Hypnominion
7/19/22, 5:45 PM
I'm also voting for 2B; the only reason that I rated it the way that I did was, in the initial part of the chapter, the author ws explicit about the character's origins in the Midwestern US, but kept consistently using British terminology, which took me out pf the story; it got better, later, however, and I found myself intrigued and more than a little turned on. Well done.

7/21/22, 4:05 AM
@Hypnominion My reasoning on that was that he's been in the UK for 6 months and he's telling his story from a point of looking back at his experience. He's going to know the majority of the basic terms at minimum after 6 months. Also when you're going to move someplace you probably do a bit of research. I'm sorry it took you out of the story a bit though. It appears you're enjoying it otherwise. Thank you fro the feedback so far.