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7/21/22, 6:20 AM
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Jul 20, 2022
7/21/22, 6:06 AM
Fucking amazing!
7/20/22, 8:04 PM
I love this story so much! I especially love the way that Talley gets talked into the situation, the very hot physical descriptions and attention to physicality! Very mysterious doings are afoot, too. This is such a lore-rich world with so many things that make me curious to know more and more!

7/21/22, 5:59 AM
@time.to.occur The way Riki talks Talley into it makes me want him so much, even though he's a character I wrote! As much as I love Talley, I think Riki is my favourite secondary character in this story, and I definitely plan to write more of him and Talley, or even some Riki standalones.
Hypnominion
7/19/22, 5:45 PM
I'm also voting for 2B; the only reason that I rated it the way that I did was, in the initial part of the chapter, the author ws explicit about the character's origins in the Midwestern US, but kept consistently using British terminology, which took me out pf the story; it got better, later, however, and I found myself intrigued and more than a little turned on. Well done.

7/21/22, 4:05 AM
@Hypnominion My reasoning on that was that he's been in the UK for 6 months and he's telling his story from a point of looking back at his experience. He's going to know the majority of the basic terms at minimum after 6 months. Also when you're going to move someplace you probably do a bit of research. I'm sorry it took you out of the story a bit though. It appears you're enjoying it otherwise. Thank you fro the feedback so far.
7/21/22, 2:16 AM
Now that’s a spicy story! (Apologies I could not resist. No pun intended……right?!)
7/21/22, 2:08 AM
Loving the lore of this story! Going back and reading previous chapters, there are even better knowing what we now know (well sorta know...I feel like there is another shoe yet to drop). You have been laying the ground work for all this from the first chapter. Let's be honest here, this isn't a short story this is a novella. Really looking forward to the next chapter because the heat between the guys is reaching a boiling point! Unruly
7/21/22, 12:56 AM
I looooved Gray coming back! I'd missed him. I especially loved the parts about him scolding and training Conner to be a good dom for a well-trained bottom. Great job again!
Secret Reader
7/21/22, 12:51 AM
Yay, happy ending.
7/20/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you.
7/20/22, 11:09 PM
By the way, no one captures my imagination like Jack Parker. Keep writing, man. You are amazing.