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Anonymous
7/20/22, 3:46 PM
I'm so glad I found this story- there's just not enough stories on here with female protagonists. Thank you for writing this!
7/20/22, 3:38 AM
Hot! I liked your previous story too, seems like this is a bit of a refinement of the ideas in that one. I'm definitely hoping to see Evan getting some permanent reduction. The way I imagine it going is that he gets horny enough at some point to lose control of himself and come again, and at this point it would make him be stuck with something smaller than he started with but still average sized -- like the 6.5 inches mentioned. Then he gets scared and backs off for a bit, but then thinks some more about it and realizes that he gets really turned on by being tiny and he doesn't want to end up being average after all. So he keeps on using the nano bots and ends up with something really far below average. Personally I don't like when guys' penises get shrunk to nothing as much as when it ends up still there but a nub, but anything around 0.5 to 3 inches seems fun to me. I think it would also be neat if Evan and Braden meet up sometime (maybe John invites them to compare) and at that point Braden's got Evan beat in terms of size (maybe Evan could convince him to lose more at that point though...) There's lots of ways you could go with it so I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in future chapters!

7/20/22, 2:01 PM
@drummer thanks so much! Yeah I want Evan to struggle about with being just below average and then maybe reducing more but nothing crazy. I also am not crazy with sub 1 inch stuff but sometimes it’s hard to stop and the sentence is written and the nub is gone. Kind of like gambling. But with cocks lol.
7/20/22, 1:46 AM
I am thinking that Evan can't stop masturbating when he gets home. This would shrink his cock down to less than a permanent nub. An innie when soft. Continues to work himself till his balls disappear. Now this might be a form of self castration. Now if that were what happened I am to understand that some female attributes might appear. Facial hair and body hair be less. Maybe even give him some larger pecs. Being muscular that might be an outcome. And from what I have read many castrated gain quite a bit of weight. But from your description it does sound like he would probably not be able to stop cumming the whole time I was just thinking about what might happen if he didn't. Now the new one Brandon I am thinking he has the will power to resist but is found out by one of his work friends. I am thinking construction work and he forces Brandon to cum till he is a nub. Not the innie that Evan becomes but still so small and never recovers and becomes the work bitch.

7/20/22, 1:59 PM
@Sprsizeme yes, hot! And yes I will definitely have to try exposing Braden to his coworkers
7/19/22, 4:24 PM
Would love one of them to end up with a smaller, average, dick while the other got reduced down to a nub or less so they can compare their little dicklets. Maybe Braden can hold out for a few weeks until he wonders, What happens after the tenth orgasm in a week? 😈

7/20/22, 1:57 PM
@Razz TFs haha yeah I want to leave one guy with something in the end. But yeah Braden might end up with a nub no more than a rounding error
7/19/22, 11:37 AM
Great start and always love a bit of cock transformation. Hoping there's more to come!

7/20/22, 1:53 PM
@Ruffcub thanks! Yes definitely at least a two part story. More to come!
7/19/22, 9:55 AM
I’m thinking Evan ends up with a 1 inch cock. Great story.

7/20/22, 1:53 PM
@tanners92 thanks! Yeah he might be lucky to have a 1 inch nub
Evan
7/20/22, 11:26 AM
This story leaves me a wreck. The care and tenderness of every beat. I hate it a little bit because I'm on the verge of tears. Every interaction with Sawyer in the memories, all the sweetness there hurts because of the tragedy of Lock's choice, his inaction, when his father discovers them. And the heartbreaking events that follow. Lock's mother's comment about the rarity of the closeness of their friendship. Another stake in my heart. Always wishing the ending could be different. And now seeing Sawyer in spirit form and he's still trying to help Lock. I am hopeful the ability to talk to Sawyer after all this time could somehow be a good thing, helpful. But that they can never have would could have been for them aches.
7/20/22, 11:13 AM
Enjoying this but it would benefit from an editorial pass to tighten up awkward expressions and fix spelling: role -> roll, bonified ->bona fide
7/20/22, 10:56 AM
An excellent ending, Hypnothrill! I love the subtle commentary here, too: Mike had the ability to help the young men (or at the very least realized what was going on), but he tried to exploit them for his own selfish needs instead of saving them, and karma slapped him across the face as a result. I’m reading it as an exploration of older gay guys using apps like TikTok to find hot young gays for their own pleasure or insisting they make OnlyFans accounts, tempting the younger ones with money. Don’t get me wrong—if someone WANTS to make an OnlyFans and has agency, I’m all for it. But pressuring someone into it when they are clearly not interested, as Mike does with the meme here, is not OK. And on a final lighter note, did you take the hypnotic eyes meme from the famous OBEY WARIO DESTROY MARIO commercial? Wonderful reference! :)
Anonymous
7/20/22, 9:45 AM
sooo hot!!! thanks for sharing...