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7/19/22, 9:55 AM
I’m thinking Evan ends up with a 1 inch cock. Great story.

7/20/22, 1:53 PM
@tanners92 thanks! Yeah he might be lucky to have a 1 inch nub
Evan
7/20/22, 11:26 AM
This story leaves me a wreck. The care and tenderness of every beat. I hate it a little bit because I'm on the verge of tears. Every interaction with Sawyer in the memories, all the sweetness there hurts because of the tragedy of Lock's choice, his inaction, when his father discovers them. And the heartbreaking events that follow. Lock's mother's comment about the rarity of the closeness of their friendship. Another stake in my heart. Always wishing the ending could be different. And now seeing Sawyer in spirit form and he's still trying to help Lock. I am hopeful the ability to talk to Sawyer after all this time could somehow be a good thing, helpful. But that they can never have would could have been for them aches.
7/20/22, 11:13 AM
Enjoying this but it would benefit from an editorial pass to tighten up awkward expressions and fix spelling: role -> roll, bonified ->bona fide
7/20/22, 10:56 AM
An excellent ending, Hypnothrill! I love the subtle commentary here, too: Mike had the ability to help the young men (or at the very least realized what was going on), but he tried to exploit them for his own selfish needs instead of saving them, and karma slapped him across the face as a result. I’m reading it as an exploration of older gay guys using apps like TikTok to find hot young gays for their own pleasure or insisting they make OnlyFans accounts, tempting the younger ones with money. Don’t get me wrong—if someone WANTS to make an OnlyFans and has agency, I’m all for it. But pressuring someone into it when they are clearly not interested, as Mike does with the meme here, is not OK. And on a final lighter note, did you take the hypnotic eyes meme from the famous OBEY WARIO DESTROY MARIO commercial? Wonderful reference! :)
Anonymous
7/20/22, 9:45 AM
sooo hot!!! thanks for sharing...
Evan
7/20/22, 9:43 AM
Likewise. Knowing the ending is not a happy one takes me some mental and emotional fortitude to read. But that, itself, speaks highly of the writing. Even in this period so outside the present, there is so much to relate to and anchor in. Well done.
Anonymous
7/20/22, 9:35 AM
I like the idea of them getting scared and locking their dicks away in chastity, so they aren't tempted to lose even more - problem is that now they're so small, they cum easily from being fucked :hot_face:
7/20/22, 4:55 AM
So frickin hot! Loved how he thought he was immune and how quickly he changed his tune. Gotta love the idea of a viral meme, acting just as fast and affecting the young men first, as it should. Another one to add to my favorites! Thanks Hypnothrill!
7/20/22, 4:15 AM
Loved it! I agree it's a tad short but really looking forward to what comes next, hoping MC gets Tyler back under