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7/18/22, 10:14 PM
thank you, I love it
7/18/22, 8:29 PM
Great idea, well written....I d like to read more about the 2 Daves
7/18/22, 7:32 PM
Hey Edlam, Thanks for finishing up the series. That black footballer with empathy being Zach best friend literally just made me lose control. Anyway, please check this part. “I think you’re excited to know that Steven Petersen will be able to take full control of everything once you’re gone. I think you’ll trust Steven fully knowing that he’ll make the best choices for himself and all the men that I’d guided into all this sexual depravity.” It should be “Petersen will be able to take full control of everything once I’m gone.”
Anonymous
7/18/22, 6:48 PM
Hoping for part 2 soon!
DWM
7/18/22, 6:31 PM
I really like the messed up theme and it's very difficult to make it hot. I really like the idea - You should work on your English and try to focus on the little details, the subtle changes. The reader knows what will be the outcome so putting different outcomes could surprise the reader.
Aug 29, 2021
Frfr
7/18/22, 6:26 PM
My all time favorite story hope to continue this on or make something similar
boi98229
5/23/22, 3:33 PM
Hey slaveboyJG! i love the premise of the full story, and the first chapter was truly captivating. Unfortunately the second chapter, as a kind of terse summary format, was disappointingly anti-climatic. It felt like an outline with all the fun and interesting detail removed. I know I am not a writer, but I am an avid reader. With that in mind you can take this suggestion with a grain of salt (hopefully not on an open wound!), but I would suggest that you replace the second chapter with something more akin to the first, and then carry on with lots more hot chapters to come!! I am very much hoping for more!

7/18/22, 6:21 PM
@boi98229 hey mate, sorry for late reply I only just saw this message. I completely understand where you’re coming from. I wanted to try a different tatic with this method and see if it stuck. I’m glad you like this story. I really need to get around to writing another chapter
7/18/22, 4:29 PM
It is true that few things feel as good as cuddling and rubbing against another soggy boy to start the day
7/18/22, 2:46 PM
Somehow classic vibe with the hypno... I like it... and his roommate not knowing that his hypno artifact needed batteries :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: this story has more potential to more chapters :eyes:
7/18/22, 6:56 AM
Long time no see! Welcome back! Very nice story as usual!

7/18/22, 2:10 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thank yoooooou so muuuuch :3