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7/19/22, 2:03 AM
I agree with the above comment. Your story would benefit from dividing into more paragraphs so that it becomes easier to read.
Anonymous
7/19/22, 12:07 AM
Could you please divide your text into more paragraphs, cause it is really hard to read it that way.
Anonymous
7/18/22, 11:00 PM
Now that’s a spicy sausage!
7/18/22, 10:21 PM
Outstanding idea, and so well written like all your work. Chapter 4 gives me a chubby just scrolling through it. I’d agree, this cliffhanger is enough. I can’t imagine you want a straightforward revenge on Booker, from Dubcon or anyone else. Or a cliched him winding up as a slave. Perhaps transformed to be the boys’ caretaker/sugar daddy but still a top just open to “requests”. He could run a home for wayward faggots or something. Having the throuple escape, albeit with a permanent “adjustment” could be fun. I actually do like the chastity cage on Darius, especially if he himself grows to want it. Wherever you take the story, can’t wait for Ch. 5!
7/18/22, 10:14 PM
thank you, I love it
7/18/22, 8:29 PM
Great idea, well written....I d like to read more about the 2 Daves
7/18/22, 7:32 PM
Hey Edlam, Thanks for finishing up the series. That black footballer with empathy being Zach best friend literally just made me lose control. Anyway, please check this part. “I think you’re excited to know that Steven Petersen will be able to take full control of everything once you’re gone. I think you’ll trust Steven fully knowing that he’ll make the best choices for himself and all the men that I’d guided into all this sexual depravity.” It should be “Petersen will be able to take full control of everything once I’m gone.”
Anonymous
7/18/22, 6:48 PM
Hoping for part 2 soon!
DWM
7/18/22, 6:31 PM
I really like the messed up theme and it's very difficult to make it hot. I really like the idea - You should work on your English and try to focus on the little details, the subtle changes. The reader knows what will be the outcome so putting different outcomes could surprise the reader.
Aug 29, 2021
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7/18/22, 6:26 PM
My all time favorite story hope to continue this on or make something similar