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boi98229
7/18/22, 6:30 AM
So very arousing!! A wonderful duel between hypnotist and reluctant subject. For me the process of seduction, the psychological ploys, the struggle, and slowly and erratically shifting power is what makes this story so hot. How about writing a prelude where Mowgli, under hypnotic control, is trained to respond to the sight and smell of Kaa's cock as a hypnotic trigger? As a natural submissive bottom myself, I much prefer the idea of being trained to orally serve Kaa than dying and being digested by him (though that was also somehow very arousing also -- and I learned the word 'vore'!).

7/18/22, 2:10 PM
@boi98229 Thank you very much for your comment! It's great to read you again :) I'm glad you liked this short story. I also love the struggle process, I really like seeing a stubborn hypnotic subject like Mowgli struggle to resist and fail. Oh, you know? I think that's a fantastic idea, maybe I'll do it. I also had another similar idea that I want to do with Kaa and his hypnotic musk. ;3
7/17/22, 11:21 PM
Very good. Love how you had Kaa use something else besides his eye to hypnotize Mowgli with. I hope you do more chapters of this.

7/18/22, 2:02 PM
@Redcoma100 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Kaa wasn't lying when he said that he has his subtle ways... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
7/17/22, 6:13 PM
Very manipulative and hypnotic! Amazing job, as always!

7/18/22, 2:00 PM
@Twan Andersen ¡Gracias amigo!
Anonymous
7/18/22, 12:49 PM
Love the preppy stories, wish this would have more detail though. More depth on how he was feeling before, during and/or after.
7/18/22, 12:21 PM
Oh, Brody is back, but Kevin seems to leave an impression on him now. Let's see where this goes. Thanks for another great installment.
Jan 23, 2019
7/18/22, 11:30 AM
aaarrrroooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
7/18/22, 11:13 AM
I knew I wanted it
7/18/22, 7:42 AM
This story reminds me of gay-cinema, there is such a deep emotion, a pain that's hard to express but you've managed to capture it so wonderfully. A wildly different take on the challege for sure, somehow you've managed to make this so grounded and real, and even the supernatural elements play into that. It's symbolic of their dynamic, they can merge bodies but there is a distance between them, and then the consequences of staying merged reflect how toxic it is to try to hold on to something that doesn't work. The ending is perfect for the narrative, there is pain, of course, but hope too, and isn't that what life is all about?

7/18/22, 10:31 AM
@Norismo Thank you, it's good to hear that the emotional parts worked. It's always the trickiest part about writing emotional pieces.
Anonymous
7/18/22, 10:03 AM
Really happy that you're continuing this! Another great instalment!
7/18/22, 6:36 AM
Preppy stories are some of my favourite, intrigued where the story is going!