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Anonymous
7/18/22, 6:48 PM
Hoping for part 2 soon!
DWM
7/18/22, 6:31 PM
I really like the messed up theme and it's very difficult to make it hot. I really like the idea - You should work on your English and try to focus on the little details, the subtle changes. The reader knows what will be the outcome so putting different outcomes could surprise the reader.
Aug 29, 2021
Frfr
7/18/22, 6:26 PM
My all time favorite story hope to continue this on or make something similar
boi98229
5/23/22, 3:33 PM
Hey slaveboyJG! i love the premise of the full story, and the first chapter was truly captivating. Unfortunately the second chapter, as a kind of terse summary format, was disappointingly anti-climatic. It felt like an outline with all the fun and interesting detail removed. I know I am not a writer, but I am an avid reader. With that in mind you can take this suggestion with a grain of salt (hopefully not on an open wound!), but I would suggest that you replace the second chapter with something more akin to the first, and then carry on with lots more hot chapters to come!! I am very much hoping for more!

7/18/22, 6:21 PM
@boi98229 hey mate, sorry for late reply I only just saw this message. I completely understand where you’re coming from. I wanted to try a different tatic with this method and see if it stuck. I’m glad you like this story. I really need to get around to writing another chapter
7/18/22, 4:29 PM
It is true that few things feel as good as cuddling and rubbing against another soggy boy to start the day
7/18/22, 2:46 PM
Somehow classic vibe with the hypno... I like it... and his roommate not knowing that his hypno artifact needed batteries :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: this story has more potential to more chapters :eyes:
7/18/22, 6:56 AM
Long time no see! Welcome back! Very nice story as usual!

7/18/22, 2:10 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thank yoooooou so muuuuch :3
boi98229
7/18/22, 6:30 AM
So very arousing!! A wonderful duel between hypnotist and reluctant subject. For me the process of seduction, the psychological ploys, the struggle, and slowly and erratically shifting power is what makes this story so hot. How about writing a prelude where Mowgli, under hypnotic control, is trained to respond to the sight and smell of Kaa's cock as a hypnotic trigger? As a natural submissive bottom myself, I much prefer the idea of being trained to orally serve Kaa than dying and being digested by him (though that was also somehow very arousing also -- and I learned the word 'vore'!).

7/18/22, 2:10 PM
@boi98229 Thank you very much for your comment! It's great to read you again :) I'm glad you liked this short story. I also love the struggle process, I really like seeing a stubborn hypnotic subject like Mowgli struggle to resist and fail. Oh, you know? I think that's a fantastic idea, maybe I'll do it. I also had another similar idea that I want to do with Kaa and his hypnotic musk. ;3
7/17/22, 11:21 PM
Very good. Love how you had Kaa use something else besides his eye to hypnotize Mowgli with. I hope you do more chapters of this.

7/18/22, 2:02 PM
@Redcoma100 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Kaa wasn't lying when he said that he has his subtle ways... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
7/17/22, 6:13 PM
Very manipulative and hypnotic! Amazing job, as always!

7/18/22, 2:00 PM
@Twan Andersen ¡Gracias amigo!