Recent Comments

7/18/22, 7:42 AM
This story reminds me of gay-cinema, there is such a deep emotion, a pain that's hard to express but you've managed to capture it so wonderfully. A wildly different take on the challege for sure, somehow you've managed to make this so grounded and real, and even the supernatural elements play into that. It's symbolic of their dynamic, they can merge bodies but there is a distance between them, and then the consequences of staying merged reflect how toxic it is to try to hold on to something that doesn't work. The ending is perfect for the narrative, there is pain, of course, but hope too, and isn't that what life is all about?

7/18/22, 10:31 AM
@Norismo Thank you, it's good to hear that the emotional parts worked. It's always the trickiest part about writing emotional pieces.
Anonymous
7/18/22, 10:03 AM
Really happy that you're continuing this! Another great instalment!
7/18/22, 6:36 AM
Preppy stories are some of my favourite, intrigued where the story is going!
Sexcrab
7/18/22, 5:10 AM
Definetely, our protagonist made a problem for yourself!
7/18/22, 4:43 AM
Fuck that was soooo hot especially with his dad in the next room, can't wait to see what happens with his dad too 🤤
7/18/22, 3:29 AM
Part 2?
7/18/22, 1:29 AM
I'm looking forward to the next part. I really love all of your writings :satisfied::satisfied::satisfied:
7/17/22, 10:59 PM
It's funny! I was thinking about this series earlier, and saw a comment you left a couple days back saying this story was coming back. I'm so happy to see Brody continue to fall into jockslut territory, and hope Kevin has a lot more planned for him lol. Excellent job!
Jerry
7/17/22, 10:52 PM
This series is so hot!
7/17/22, 10:33 PM
finally great to see kevin pop his cherry. Hoping to see more Hank next