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Jul 17, 2022
Swizzington
7/17/22, 5:31 PM
I don't usually go for stories which incorporate pictures because they're typically just random photographs of real people the writer has found on the internet somewhere. Because yours have a more cartoony, hand drawn style, I think they actually work a lot better. Thanks for posting!
7/17/22, 2:54 PM
Actually a good story, but please use paragraphs man. It's really hard to read x

7/17/22, 4:56 PM
@Sandancer1 Crap! I had to copy and paste it from my Patreon while on my my phone… I wrote it on my old laptop so I don’t have access to the original file 😒. I’ll fix it! Thanks for letting me know!
Anonymous
7/17/22, 4:49 PM
Love those mind changing gainer stories .Hope you continue the series. would love to see him to become a full flege gainer fatty
7/17/22, 4:08 PM
I really love the way you write the story. You are the best writer in this site for me !!
7/17/22, 3:54 PM
Here's other chapter ideas ! Pryer Getting Mad & Punishes His Guys & Masculines All. Aging them more like Pryer. "Getting Rid of All that Pretty -Boy Looks" Wild Hair Coloring & Hair & beard Styles. Shaving Head & Eyelashes. Many Piercings & Tattoos Cigar Smoking & Beer Guzzling & More Bad Habits. More Fetishes. Going to "Ben's Bar". & All that entails ! Meeting All Sorts Of Characters ! Also Day to Day All New Living arrangements ! Also Screwing Up Petersen Gals old lives. "Putting All That Mussel to work" for Pryer. Corrupting more Strangers Also Remember Larry is Looking for Guys for Pryer! Then there's Zach's Football career shenanigans. Also Pryer Suddenly Remembers Things & Shit Hits His Fans ! (Pun Intended). Just Think of All the possibilities ! Looking for much more perverted stories ! Proper Pryer Perverts proper English Language with fucked up cursed slang & looses his tenure! Steven turns into a feminine Hairdresser.
7/17/22, 3:17 PM
"Petersen Prayer To Pryer" Thanks for all your HARD work...pun intended ! Nice to see an emotional side to pryer !
7/17/22, 7:57 AM
I’m gonna try writing this again. I started writing a comment just before this one. I started it once I arrived at the bottom of the page, after having just read this amazing achievement and having its talented writing enable me to have slipped into my imagination, experiencing a full immersion into make-believe, which was awesome! But my first attempt at my comment sent me right back into my waking dream and I had been nonstop writing it for over an hour, before I started myself aware and realized that posting the lengthy comment would not be appreciated. Not only had I waaay overwritten, but I somehow slipped into my imagination so fully that I had basically written another story, about me and my connection I feel with this great work. Not what a comment post is for and not respectful to basically publish another story within this talented writer’s space created for this incredibly compelling tale. Thank you for what you created here and for the joy & bliss it’s brought me. You’ve manifested a well crafted, expertly written story that is rich with perfectly formed characters, action, scenes, background, storyline, and a lingering desire for more! And by doing so, I’ve not only been enchanted by my first read, but I have a place to revisit for another shot of joy & bliss, again and again! Thank you.

7/17/22, 2:38 PM
@RiverRhode thank you so much! I’m glad to give you something you enjoy appreciate your kind words. I wouldn’t have minded you sharing… I’m always looking for story ideas and would be happy to expand on any ideas.
Bimarguy
7/17/22, 11:53 AM
Another great chapter. Yes I agree Booker is a dick , but who knows what’s truly in his head. Marcus could after all not be under the laced weed, acting freely now . maybe dad thinks Darius deserves a loyal bottom lover
Ben
7/17/22, 9:25 AM
I love your stories in general, but this one chapter is just magnificent!!! So hot yet so romantic.
Martin
7/17/22, 8:45 AM
A short but extremely hot story. That hypno scene made me rock hard. Thanks!