Recent Comments

Ben
7/17/22, 9:25 AM
I love your stories in general, but this one chapter is just magnificent!!! So hot yet so romantic.
Martin
7/17/22, 8:45 AM
A short but extremely hot story. That hypno scene made me rock hard. Thanks!
Bl Guy
7/17/22, 7:26 AM
Everything about this story is so so amazing... from the interactions to the lore, this has got to be my fav series in this site, like damn does it hit all the buttons. I'm not much into polyamory, but this throuple reaction is so cute and hot at the same time. I really wanna know how you're going to take it here. I love how Xander finally opened up, and having a dom-sub kinda thing where they actually love and care for each other rather than just abusing and treating as a plaything just makes it hotter and sexier for me. Also I'm guessing maybe Allan too has some connection with the parallel universe (I remember he had a dream of the apocalypse)
boi98229
7/16/22, 4:40 AM
Wow! Mr. Booker could really complicate things for our wonderful throuple. He seems very adept at playing with people's minds and emotions, both psychologically and chemically. i hope our boys can in the end make great use of Mr. Booker's knowledge and his emotional and financial support of his son, and still stay true to each other, and kind to all. In the meantime though, i do wonder how exciting, interesting, and hot things might get as Mr. Booker and his minions stir the pot. Please, please Sir GoonNoob, keep the chapters coming. I'm already deeply addicted and will need a fix of your creative writing again very soon. So until then, i just want to say thank-you, thank-you for your sick and twisted imagination and your ability to capture all those delightfully wicked thoughts on paper so vividly. ~david ps i think i may be developing a crush. :flushed:

7/16/22, 3:17 PM
@boi98229 hey David, thank you very much for that lovely, personal comment (my dms are open btw to chat 😉). Glad my sick, twisted imagination keeps you cumming back for more! Mr Booker might be the most devious antagonist I've revealed so far. As you said, both weoponising psychological, financial and chemical forms of domination, he is also Darius father, who might be clinging to the idea his dad will accept him and his partners as they are and not thrilled at the idea of taking him down; what Booker probably sees as a weakness to exploit. My god. I've created quite the cunt 🤣

boi98229
7/17/22, 6:11 AM
@GoonNoob Truly all these are possible weapons in the hands of a devious and powerful Alpha. i am afraid our boys are in for considerable trouble. I am particularly afraid for Marcus, who will certainly be the prime target, and almost as certainly successfully taken down. The pertinent questions are how will he be taken, how deep he will go, and how permanent the harm might be? However, the most pertinent question to me is when will chapter 5 be published? I am definitely starting to feel weak and irritable, and will need my fix soon -- if it pleases you of course, Sir.
7/16/22, 5:48 AM
I'm really hoping that the shady company Booker used to work for is Dubcon Corp and they're out for payback because none of your characters thus far have deserved the Dubcon treatment quite like him.

7/16/22, 3:09 PM
@phillipsm more than Officer Adams? I remember after writing his chapter getting my first negative feedback/constructive criticism 🤣. But yes, 1 thing is absolute: you don't fuck with Dubcon.

7/17/22, 5:25 AM
@GoonNoob yes even Officer Adams. I mean sure he was horrible, but Booker has a cruel, calculated maliciousness, a supreme sense of arrogance and superiority and an almost lack of humanity that just make him so much worse.
7/17/22, 5:09 AM
One of the hottest fucking stories I have read on here. I was totally hooked in chapter 1. By the time I got to the end of chapter 3 my balls were ready to unload. There are more chapters of this story on Wesley Bracken's site (wesleybracken.com). I have only read a bit further but it just keeps getting hotter. I'm a HUGE fan of this author.
6/28/22, 4:53 PM
Not dead, didn't forget you. Just busy with a new job, a new boy, and such things. I have sent the next chapter to my editor and once that good boy is finished, I'll be posting. I know it's a wait, it's a long story I'm wanting to do for you, as we find things to do to poor Marky.

Daddiesdaddy
7/17/22, 4:33 AM
@Max Potter some leather training. Chastity phone activated vibrating electro plugs
Marky
5/7/22, 2:34 PM
Max Potter has forgotten us

Daddiesdaddy
7/17/22, 4:30 AM
He is writing his books and this story will just continue the same suffering for the MC with no revenge or escape
Anonymous
9/23/21, 10:37 AM
I'd like to see this start transitioning into his escape/revenge. Another slave would also be

JollyJerk
11/28/21, 8:50 AM
@Anonymous Yeah, I agree. Could personally do with less of the farting etc but hey, each to their own. Ain't gonna yuck someone else's yum.

Anonymous
7/17/22, 4:28 AM
@the author said never going to happen..continued suffering, no escape
Newcub45
7/16/22, 11:22 PM
I love this! Curious to see where it will go!