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7/17/22, 4:08 PM
I really love the way you write the story. You are the best writer in this site for me !!
7/17/22, 3:54 PM
Here's other chapter ideas ! Pryer Getting Mad & Punishes His Guys & Masculines All. Aging them more like Pryer. "Getting Rid of All that Pretty -Boy Looks" Wild Hair Coloring & Hair & beard Styles. Shaving Head & Eyelashes. Many Piercings & Tattoos Cigar Smoking & Beer Guzzling & More Bad Habits. More Fetishes. Going to "Ben's Bar". & All that entails ! Meeting All Sorts Of Characters ! Also Day to Day All New Living arrangements ! Also Screwing Up Petersen Gals old lives. "Putting All That Mussel to work" for Pryer. Corrupting more Strangers Also Remember Larry is Looking for Guys for Pryer! Then there's Zach's Football career shenanigans. Also Pryer Suddenly Remembers Things & Shit Hits His Fans ! (Pun Intended). Just Think of All the possibilities ! Looking for much more perverted stories ! Proper Pryer Perverts proper English Language with fucked up cursed slang & looses his tenure! Steven turns into a feminine Hairdresser.
7/17/22, 3:17 PM
"Petersen Prayer To Pryer" Thanks for all your HARD work...pun intended ! Nice to see an emotional side to pryer !
7/17/22, 7:57 AM
I’m gonna try writing this again. I started writing a comment just before this one. I started it once I arrived at the bottom of the page, after having just read this amazing achievement and having its talented writing enable me to have slipped into my imagination, experiencing a full immersion into make-believe, which was awesome! But my first attempt at my comment sent me right back into my waking dream and I had been nonstop writing it for over an hour, before I started myself aware and realized that posting the lengthy comment would not be appreciated. Not only had I waaay overwritten, but I somehow slipped into my imagination so fully that I had basically written another story, about me and my connection I feel with this great work. Not what a comment post is for and not respectful to basically publish another story within this talented writer’s space created for this incredibly compelling tale. Thank you for what you created here and for the joy & bliss it’s brought me. You’ve manifested a well crafted, expertly written story that is rich with perfectly formed characters, action, scenes, background, storyline, and a lingering desire for more! And by doing so, I’ve not only been enchanted by my first read, but I have a place to revisit for another shot of joy & bliss, again and again! Thank you.

7/17/22, 2:38 PM
@RiverRhode thank you so much! I’m glad to give you something you enjoy appreciate your kind words. I wouldn’t have minded you sharing… I’m always looking for story ideas and would be happy to expand on any ideas.
Bimarguy
7/17/22, 11:53 AM
Another great chapter. Yes I agree Booker is a dick , but who knows what’s truly in his head. Marcus could after all not be under the laced weed, acting freely now . maybe dad thinks Darius deserves a loyal bottom lover
Ben
7/17/22, 9:25 AM
I love your stories in general, but this one chapter is just magnificent!!! So hot yet so romantic.
Martin
7/17/22, 8:45 AM
A short but extremely hot story. That hypno scene made me rock hard. Thanks!
Bl Guy
7/17/22, 7:26 AM
Everything about this story is so so amazing... from the interactions to the lore, this has got to be my fav series in this site, like damn does it hit all the buttons. I'm not much into polyamory, but this throuple reaction is so cute and hot at the same time. I really wanna know how you're going to take it here. I love how Xander finally opened up, and having a dom-sub kinda thing where they actually love and care for each other rather than just abusing and treating as a plaything just makes it hotter and sexier for me. Also I'm guessing maybe Allan too has some connection with the parallel universe (I remember he had a dream of the apocalypse)
boi98229
7/16/22, 4:40 AM
Wow! Mr. Booker could really complicate things for our wonderful throuple. He seems very adept at playing with people's minds and emotions, both psychologically and chemically. i hope our boys can in the end make great use of Mr. Booker's knowledge and his emotional and financial support of his son, and still stay true to each other, and kind to all. In the meantime though, i do wonder how exciting, interesting, and hot things might get as Mr. Booker and his minions stir the pot. Please, please Sir GoonNoob, keep the chapters coming. I'm already deeply addicted and will need a fix of your creative writing again very soon. So until then, i just want to say thank-you, thank-you for your sick and twisted imagination and your ability to capture all those delightfully wicked thoughts on paper so vividly. ~david ps i think i may be developing a crush. :flushed:

7/16/22, 3:17 PM
@boi98229 hey David, thank you very much for that lovely, personal comment (my dms are open btw to chat 😉). Glad my sick, twisted imagination keeps you cumming back for more! Mr Booker might be the most devious antagonist I've revealed so far. As you said, both weoponising psychological, financial and chemical forms of domination, he is also Darius father, who might be clinging to the idea his dad will accept him and his partners as they are and not thrilled at the idea of taking him down; what Booker probably sees as a weakness to exploit. My god. I've created quite the cunt 🤣

boi98229
7/17/22, 6:11 AM
@GoonNoob Truly all these are possible weapons in the hands of a devious and powerful Alpha. i am afraid our boys are in for considerable trouble. I am particularly afraid for Marcus, who will certainly be the prime target, and almost as certainly successfully taken down. The pertinent questions are how will he be taken, how deep he will go, and how permanent the harm might be? However, the most pertinent question to me is when will chapter 5 be published? I am definitely starting to feel weak and irritable, and will need my fix soon -- if it pleases you of course, Sir.
7/16/22, 5:48 AM
I'm really hoping that the shady company Booker used to work for is Dubcon Corp and they're out for payback because none of your characters thus far have deserved the Dubcon treatment quite like him.

7/16/22, 3:09 PM
@phillipsm more than Officer Adams? I remember after writing his chapter getting my first negative feedback/constructive criticism 🤣. But yes, 1 thing is absolute: you don't fuck with Dubcon.

7/17/22, 5:25 AM
@GoonNoob yes even Officer Adams. I mean sure he was horrible, but Booker has a cruel, calculated maliciousness, a supreme sense of arrogance and superiority and an almost lack of humanity that just make him so much worse.