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7/16/22, 11:01 AM
That was a really interesting chapter! At some stages I wondered if I regretted opting for more chapters, but as long as there will be a true happy ending (and there better be) I'm with you. I saw someone comment on the chastity cage, and I agreed that I want it off but I must admit that it's not only that I want him to be equal and free of Brook's manipulation but also chastity is less my thing. Having said that, I think it would be strange that they'll keep the cage which was added purely as a domination tool and then claim he is equal to them. The two things that bothered me was that X&D didn't think it's unwise to leave Marcus alone with a person who has the tools and the intention to make Marcus a slave and that Marcus didn't think that it's dangerous to take a joint for the exact same reason. But once again, I guess that otherwise there wouldn't have been any plot. So to sum up; X&D still need to prove themselves and make up, Marcus is precious and Brooks need to be taken down asap. I can't wait for the next chapter though I hope there won't be a lot more heartbreaking moments before the happy ending!

7/16/22, 3:08 PM
@Reader if you've read a few of my series, you'll see that while those effected by a brain alteration let their experience guide their future, they're not _necessarily_ still under the influence. So while they might make choices about their freedom, its left vague if they would've chosen the same if they he never gone through their trials.

7/16/22, 5:36 PM
@GoonNoob Just realized I wrote brook instead of Booker. Oops. In my defense I was pretty horny and wasn't thinking clearly. BTW I'm curious to know how you chose the name for that tribe. Like, do they have a meaning/based on some other words? I want to say that the Ansu Sisa resembles sissy anus but I don't want to make assumptions

7/16/22, 5:50 PM
@Reader they're based on actual South American tribe languages, which will give you a hint to the next series I'm writing at the moment, that goes into the 90's incident. Wiraqocha comes from the word 'man' and Ansu Sisa loosely translates as Ass Flower.
7/16/22, 5:28 PM
This story makes me want to be a cow too
Jul 13, 2022
7/16/22, 4:44 PM
Another great start. I love a good dubious consent tale. My cock really responds to a guy reluctantly finding out how much his body loves to be used by another man but the best part is him gradually finding out just how much he craves having another man fuck his mind as well. I hope Joey is taught to become a fulfilled, happy and prosperous cock craving slut for masculine alphas to use and enjoy. That journey has so many possibilities. Can hardly wait for the ride Jack. 😘
7/16/22, 1:30 PM
Really good stuff, the idea, the way its written and the scenarios👍

7/16/22, 3:49 PM
@CigarCop glad you like it. I enjoyed writing it
7/15/22, 10:30 PM
I really hope they haven't been shattered by this.

7/16/22, 3:18 PM
@NeedControlling cracked... but not broken x
Anonymous
7/16/22, 3:08 AM
rooting for Marcus to be free from the cage and happy with his boyfriends

7/16/22, 3:18 PM
@ me too!
Anonymous
7/16/22, 11:03 AM
Nice chapter, I'm really liking this series! Big fan of the the domination aspects here too. Are there other varieties of the drug with distinct effects, or is the Q weed the only one?

7/16/22, 3:04 PM
@ funny you should ask. While the cross-breed Q weed that Booker grows is the only version you'll see in this story, the original plant has a multitude of qualities that you're going to see in the next 'jungle' story. But sssh spoilers ;)
7/16/22, 1:06 PM
I think all bullies should come up with sneaky plans like that. XD
7/16/22, 11:36 AM
I like that you are experimenting. Interesting concept. A bit weird but love the humiliation. ;)
7/16/22, 11:31 AM
So glad you're continuing this story :) Very hot and full of good world building Thank you !