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7/16/22, 9:48 AM
This story went crazy lol
4/12/22, 7:30 PM
This chapter is just crazy awesome. Sammy is hitting his stride!

4/14/22, 1:20 AM
@stimle thanks bud

Anonymous
7/14/22, 6:04 AM
@stimle this kinda reminds me of a story you wrote, Outrageous Fortune. That was a great story and it's to bad you didn't keep it going. any chance you might continue it with another couple of chapters? you and Jack both seem to have a knack for turning hot straight studs into desperate pussy's. I love how you both slowly take down the straight stud and we see him turning into more and more of a slutty bitch that's desperate for it.

7/14/22, 6:06 AM
@ Stimle is a huge talent and just being talked about in the same sentence is a massive compliment.

Anonymous
7/14/22, 7:02 AM
@Jack Parker you and stimle are def 2 of my favs. there isn't a ton of stories out there where a hot older stud gets taken down and turned into a slutty pussy bitch by a younger (legal) guy. I love the way you make the former stud admit he has a pussy and refer to him as a good girl/princess during sex. that's so hot. jack, is there any chance you could post your stories/chapters on the other sites you use? I love this site but as a non-member safe mode blocks a lot of your chapters/stories. thnx for considering it.

7/15/22, 2:14 AM
@Jack Parker 🙏🏻☺️

7/15/22, 2:16 AM
Once I’m finished updating Joaquin, I plan to update and continue Outrageous Fortune.

Anonymous
7/16/22, 5:44 AM
@stimle that's awesome!!! I'm so excited that you are writing again. You should post Outrageous Fortune on here.
7/16/22, 5:09 AM
Thank you thank you thank you for writing more of this! I hope the next chapter comes out very soon. Incidentally, check out the novels by 'Nathan Burgoine. The last few chapters reminds me of his work.

7/16/22, 5:14 AM
@Auraseer11 Interesting, I actually follow him on Twitter but I haven't read any of his books yet. I just liked a lot of the tweets he made. As you can see this chapter is extremely large because I just couldn't break it up so it was really like two chapters in one. Hopefully the next chapter is a little bit more reasonably sized and won't take as long.
7/15/22, 10:27 PM
This story is so hot and fun! Thank you for bring it back and expanding it. I do remember the first time I read it. I was hard from beginning to end. It frustrated me so much that you stopped writing it. Glad to have this characters back. Keep on the great writing man!👍❤️😛

7/16/22, 5:13 AM
@BrzNLA Oh I'm glad you're still enjoying it despite it being more plot heavy recently!
7/16/22, 4:54 AM
This was an excellent first chapter and I look forward to the (dark) things to come :)
7/16/22, 4:17 AM
This is a great story and I enjoyed it. I kind of wish that there was more time between each shrinking at least for the first two. But I also really liked how by the end he was well aware of what was going to happen as it kept going and was all for it.
7/15/22, 1:33 AM
Love this story. So much detail it was so visual in my mind. Would love to see more of your work.

7/16/22, 3:16 AM
@Titan Thanks... Glad you enjoyed it. I've been working on a new story, but can't seem to find the time to finish it.
7/16/22, 2:50 AM
What a very amazing and glorious ride this was! I’m so glad you shared this series with us, Edlam. I appreciate the hard work you put to deliver and finish this whole series for us and I wish you the best of luck on your future endeavors. One thing that I will say is that I wish we got to see maybe a chapter or two of how Steven is like as the new “Master.” It wouldve been interesting to see the new dynamic with him and his sons, his wife’s boyfriend and all the other guys within Pryer’s harem. Other than that though, this was a very solid conclusion!
7/15/22, 11:40 AM
Really enjoyed this story! I especially loved the build-up to Axel giving in. My favourite scene was probably Rivera's initial transformation over the phone. You write desire and need so well. I loved the combination of Axel's resistance and arousal about the transformation.

7/16/22, 2:02 AM
@time.to.occur I'm glad I pulled off Rivera's transformation! I was excited when I had that idea and it was fun to write. I'm going to have to learn from myself here. Desire and need are important themes for me throughout many of my stories, along with resistance and arousal, and I want to portray those authentically and arousingly. Thanks for reading!
7/15/22, 9:16 PM
One bit of confusion : Pryer self-programmed to be content dying as fast as possible. Why wouldn't that have resulted in him immediately committing suicide? Steven's drive to make it happen immediately is consistent with the directive.. Pryer not acting on it with the same urgency doesn't seem to be consistent though.

7/16/22, 12:02 AM
@anarchomegalomaniac I struggled with how to word it in a way that would make it urgent for Steven to not feel badly about Pryer passing on soon while also ensuring it was a guarantee that Pryer would interpret it that way fully. For me, at least, the way the phrase was worded would still trigger an element of self-preservation for Pryer while not necessarily for an outside person, especially one that had just become a complete and utter narcissist only concerned with their own pleasure. I guess it COULD be interpreted that Pryer would have influenced himself to end it in that moment, but I don't think Pryer was causing the need to immediately cause the end, just that he'd be comfortable and enjoy his sex slaves until it happened. That all said, I wrote the story ultimately to get you all to masturbate at some point during it, which I hope I succeeded in, even if I goofed it on the lore slightly :P