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7/16/22, 4:54 AM
This was an excellent first chapter and I look forward to the (dark) things to come :)
7/16/22, 4:17 AM
This is a great story and I enjoyed it. I kind of wish that there was more time between each shrinking at least for the first two. But I also really liked how by the end he was well aware of what was going to happen as it kept going and was all for it.
7/15/22, 1:33 AM
Love this story. So much detail it was so visual in my mind. Would love to see more of your work.

7/16/22, 3:16 AM
@Titan Thanks... Glad you enjoyed it. I've been working on a new story, but can't seem to find the time to finish it.
7/16/22, 2:50 AM
What a very amazing and glorious ride this was! I’m so glad you shared this series with us, Edlam. I appreciate the hard work you put to deliver and finish this whole series for us and I wish you the best of luck on your future endeavors. One thing that I will say is that I wish we got to see maybe a chapter or two of how Steven is like as the new “Master.” It wouldve been interesting to see the new dynamic with him and his sons, his wife’s boyfriend and all the other guys within Pryer’s harem. Other than that though, this was a very solid conclusion!
7/15/22, 11:40 AM
Really enjoyed this story! I especially loved the build-up to Axel giving in. My favourite scene was probably Rivera's initial transformation over the phone. You write desire and need so well. I loved the combination of Axel's resistance and arousal about the transformation.

7/16/22, 2:02 AM
@time.to.occur I'm glad I pulled off Rivera's transformation! I was excited when I had that idea and it was fun to write. I'm going to have to learn from myself here. Desire and need are important themes for me throughout many of my stories, along with resistance and arousal, and I want to portray those authentically and arousingly. Thanks for reading!
7/15/22, 9:16 PM
One bit of confusion : Pryer self-programmed to be content dying as fast as possible. Why wouldn't that have resulted in him immediately committing suicide? Steven's drive to make it happen immediately is consistent with the directive.. Pryer not acting on it with the same urgency doesn't seem to be consistent though.

7/16/22, 12:02 AM
@anarchomegalomaniac I struggled with how to word it in a way that would make it urgent for Steven to not feel badly about Pryer passing on soon while also ensuring it was a guarantee that Pryer would interpret it that way fully. For me, at least, the way the phrase was worded would still trigger an element of self-preservation for Pryer while not necessarily for an outside person, especially one that had just become a complete and utter narcissist only concerned with their own pleasure. I guess it COULD be interpreted that Pryer would have influenced himself to end it in that moment, but I don't think Pryer was causing the need to immediately cause the end, just that he'd be comfortable and enjoy his sex slaves until it happened. That all said, I wrote the story ultimately to get you all to masturbate at some point during it, which I hope I succeeded in, even if I goofed it on the lore slightly :P
7/14/22, 12:16 PM
The professor created a state of utter deviance and super indulged in an unsustainable way. And now, Steve has become a monster that will continue to conquer men, but will also be the end of the man who twisted him. Karma at it's best. Now, I'm not sure what loophole Zach and Larry exploited, but I'm so glad they are far removed from what Steve will create and will be happy on their own. A really great story, incredibly hot, and I loved how you painted a picture of the environment our villain created and how it got out of hand for him, as he was the main victim of his desires. Kudos, as always, another incredibly story!

7/14/22, 2:33 PM
@Essex Same point on the Larry loophole. If someone clever can point it for those of us who missed, that would really scratch an itch. Maybe it's time for a reread (or at the very least, reread the chapter with Larry in it.) Though nevertheless, everyone is happy. The Larry fans are happy, the Pryer fans are happy.

7/15/22, 3:01 PM
@yetanotheranonymous not sure, but Inthink mybe Mr. Prayer knowing he will be gone soon, decided to return Zachary to Larry, but not the ability to.contr him... maybe having a differenr relationship where Zack will be the dominant one and Larry will be the submissive just to not lose him again :eyes:

7/15/22, 11:53 PM
@Essex basicially: Larry had Zack open to be able to use 'I think's on him. So because that power is present, when Zachary said "I think he can say literally anything he wants, and they’ll not be able to resist doing it regardless of what they may have thought they wanted before" in regards to Pryer, it unintentionally opened up Larry to be able to talk to Zack however he wanted too. Therefore, Larry could whisper 'I thinks' to Zack again :P
7/15/22, 11:31 PM
Another hot story from Elan Musk. I hope you continue this story with other chapters or side stories.
Anonymous
7/15/22, 9:48 PM
i dont like mr booker i hope he gets what coming to him and marcus can be free and happy
Anonymous
7/15/22, 12:29 AM
This had been a different take on a forced rubber subjugation story. I don't mean negatively. I'm glad you moved away from the ws, I've never been a fan. But why did you add incest as a tag? There isn't any.

7/15/22, 1:11 AM
There’s definitely a lot more of the forced stuff to come, again the plan is for this to be a slow burn, so the WS will be returning and be making regular appearances as its all part of the transformation. Added the incest tag because of the ending, and also for a few other reasons 😏. Thank you for your input and hope you enjoy the rest of Dukes journey @

Martin
7/15/22, 9:25 PM
@SadistictBullDog89 You should not add tags to chapters only because you plan to add sth later. Just add the tags to a chapter which are suitable to that very chapter. Otherwise the readers are mislead. The series will always inherit all tags from all its chapters.

7/15/22, 9:30 PM
Fair Point. Have removed it. As always thank you for the input! The More ya know right. @Martin