Recent Comments

7/15/22, 1:09 PM
Glad to see you back, mate! I hope the writing program got you back into a great mindset for writing but be sure to take breaks and such =) Looking forward to seeing more material from you. Our interests align very closely and I've always appreciated your stories! There are a few errors spell check wouldn't have caught but overall I loved this one!

7/15/22, 6:11 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast Thank you for the comments. I see a few things that you are pointing to; I did paste this in Word from Scrivener (the program that is helping me produce) but I didn't do the Read Aloud in Word. So your comment reminds me that I still need to do that. But thank you for your support; I'm glad to have readers like you supporting the work and making their support known.
fry
7/15/22, 5:00 PM
:worried::worried::pleading_face::pleading_face::fearful::cry: I have to know how it all ends.
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7/15/22, 3:28 PM
I have loved this series. I hope it continues. I so want to be Steven.
7/15/22, 3:23 PM
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed. Chapter 5 is probably going to be another long one. Am curious to everyone’s opinion as to what Duke will decide in next chapter. To be the son Master wants, to fight and try and hold onto his will?
7/15/22, 3:15 PM
Amazing.. I savoured it over three days. I hope @EdIam that we won't have to wait six months for some more of your stories. Thank you for a brilliant series
Anonymous
7/15/22, 1:30 PM
Great story. Very interesting. Good job
7/15/22, 12:45 PM
Amazing new chapter! I like the idea of leaving Jackson as a mysterious force—plus, unlike most complete monsters, he has a degree of compassion and empathy, which is nice. We love the morally ambiguous characters! My only note would be to lower the amount of weight Colin gains: as it stands, he puts on *forty-five pounds* in the span of two weeks, which isn’t just almost impossible biologically, it raises the question as to why no one else at the college notices. Granted, it’s a fantasy story, but since Jackson doesn’t provide any kind of perception filter, it seems surprising that Colin ballooning up in the span of two weeks doesn’t raise any attention. But that’s a minor detail. It’s an amazing tale—take the time you need to finish it!
7/14/22, 1:39 PM
Thanks for this story. I found the extreme miniaturizing of the cock very erotic and I don’t think you took it to far. Would like to see what other body mods you could do maybe even to Brad.

7/15/22, 11:20 AM
@Titan thanks! Yeah I was thinking of hitting Brad with some changes. Any suggestions? Haha
7/15/22, 9:31 AM
So cool. I love your story :satisfied: