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7/13/22, 10:03 PM
That. Was. Insane. Perfect. Crazy. Wonderful! This story has been one of my faves since the single entry of the first I think years ago. What an amazing arc of the story! The gravitas is perfectly satisfied. The larry fans see that Larry gets Zack again, and the readers who reveled in the immoral debauchary have that continued in Steven. Pryer achieves his life's utmost fantasy and gets the consolation of his conscience that he did everything that he could to try and give steven back what Pryer took from him. Thats going to crash and burn when he checks for the safe and it will be gone, but thats not a concern for Steven any longer. The balance of justice, vice, and romance was superb. I cannot praise your talent enough. If you find any reason to revisit this story again in future years, i will rejoice. Thank you. Thank you for this story.

7/14/22, 2:59 AM
@Mind Labyrinth what an amazing review! Thank you so much for your kind words 🥰 ultimately, my goal with the story was to explore absolute power and how quickly it can end up turning on you…no matter how careful you think you’re being.
Jul 13, 2022
Evan
7/14/22, 2:02 AM
The idea that Aiden opened up Scott while he was unconscious to help him take his dick and lubed him is actually pretty hot. And makes the pleasure as a tool to dominate him and have a cock in him all the better. No pain to highlight any resistance or doubts.
bunnyboy
7/13/22, 8:44 PM
I loved it. I love that in the story the shrinking was elective and so addictive. I definitely saw myself and Jake

7/14/22, 12:17 AM
@bunnyboy thanks so much! I most often prefer the characters to desire it over being forced on them. I know of guys in long term chastity who choose to do it and I think this is a similar mindset.
7/13/22, 11:52 PM
Hot story!
Anonymous
7/13/22, 10:31 PM
Fantastic first part of the story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Perseus
7/13/22, 9:54 PM
This is one of the best series I’ve read. Thank you.
Jul 13, 2022
7/13/22, 9:01 PM
The style is the usual awesome and sex scenes great but I'm just not into victims getting victimized again. When a character is degraded the way Scott was, it's hotter when it's their karma.

7/13/22, 9:03 PM
@THAT Steve I agree but this was what the client wanted.

7/13/22, 9:44 PM
@Jack Parker We probably don’t see eye to eye on this, but I think this is a great story. I don’t see Scott(y) as anything other than a victim of his current circumstance. That Aiden awakens - triggers?- something inside of him that Scott didn’t realize was there, was hot to read. Kudos.
Jul 13, 2022
7/13/22, 9:44 PM
I’m a fan of the humiliation at the hands of Scotty’s high school tormentor brother. This story remind me of the boy who grew up, but could not forget his past. Scottys body matured, but his personal situation remains the same. Him submitting to Aiden, is hot, because it pure domination and no drugs. Great Job, Jack.
Joe
7/13/22, 9:32 PM
I love your story more interracial stories on gay spiral stories.