Recent Comments

Nutiper
7/13/22, 4:29 PM
Hmmmm. This is, hands down, my favorite story that's been posted on this site all year. I can't really sum up just how much I am enjoying this damn thing, or how mad I am that I need to wait patiently for more chapters as they post instead of being able to shotgun it all in one go. I think this could be fifty chapters long and I'd probably be asking for more. I'm not really prone to hyperbole so I hope you are taking this sentiment seriously, S. Q. Neemie!!!!! Also I am (of course) tracking clues and forming theories around the central mystery. I considered sharing my theories in a comment, too, but I suspect I'm following a red herring anyway... Something doesn't seem to add up between Murkwater's and Kane's stories though. Whether they're in cahoots, or perhaps just one is lying and the other isn't... Well I guess I'll have to be patient and wait to find out. Bah.
Feb 23, 2014
4/26/18, 3:57 AM
I just saw that somebody commented on this. I wrote this story nearly 4 years ago. Although I know I wrote this story, I haven't revisited it in all this time. I would have to reread it, and try to refresh my memory. Sorry that I don't have a ready answer. Give me a few days, and let me see if I can get a chance to read it.

Anonymous
7/13/22, 2:44 PM
@rubbrsome I wish this was a true story because I would love to be that drone

Rick
7/13/22, 2:47 PM
@I love that story and wish that I could be a drone if someone see this and would help me full fill my dream here is email joachimrick 3@gmail.com
7/13/22, 1:31 PM
Delicious writing. It would have been great to get more details about his transformation, or a sequel about what AUTOMATA are used for.
7/13/22, 10:35 AM
Amazingly written, amazingly plotted, amazingly *everything*. I love this series so damn much.

7/13/22, 1:16 PM
@Twan Andersen Oh thank you! This part ran a lot longer than I wanted to because I ended up having to include material that was supposed to go into the next part. It just didn't break well otherwise.
PromethiumJPM
7/13/22, 12:45 PM
Dude, you need to wrap this story up! However many chapters, new avenues (I hope) and just tidy it up, I’ve been dreaming about the next steps for days, reading and rereading! Please! You gave us hope, and dried up man! I hope your creative fixes are back, and if not, could I help unclog that flow! 🤤🤤
Evan
7/13/22, 10:54 AM
I just love the mystery. There are tidbits everywhere but what is important to the case and what is not. I am sad that Kane lost Evan. That the note was so short and feels like an excuse to go and not sincere. Let's hope they find Evan and bring him back to Kane. Deprogramming whatever happened to him to be ambitious and a work-a-holic. Let alone disappearing. That son sure is a handful. I think it's very good for him they moved from Straightsylvania. Truly love this series and can't wait for more!
7/13/22, 10:01 AM
thank you Ediam for having incridible and super hot stories for us. can not wait to see your other hot stories. :100:
Anon
7/13/22, 9:44 AM
Damn poor Johannes Happy for Larry though
7/13/22, 9:34 AM
Amazing ending. Love every part of it.
7/13/22, 9:12 AM
The best story has returned! I was beginning to worry that you might have abandoned this story or that we would have to wait a long time because of your new series. Thanks for continueing. Hoping for Tanner and the pastor to have a talk again soon. My favorit part of the story.