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7/13/22, 10:35 AM
Amazingly written, amazingly plotted, amazingly *everything*. I love this series so damn much.

7/13/22, 1:16 PM
@Twan Andersen Oh thank you! This part ran a lot longer than I wanted to because I ended up having to include material that was supposed to go into the next part. It just didn't break well otherwise.
PromethiumJPM
7/13/22, 12:45 PM
Dude, you need to wrap this story up! However many chapters, new avenues (I hope) and just tidy it up, I’ve been dreaming about the next steps for days, reading and rereading! Please! You gave us hope, and dried up man! I hope your creative fixes are back, and if not, could I help unclog that flow! 🤤🤤
Evan
7/13/22, 10:54 AM
I just love the mystery. There are tidbits everywhere but what is important to the case and what is not. I am sad that Kane lost Evan. That the note was so short and feels like an excuse to go and not sincere. Let's hope they find Evan and bring him back to Kane. Deprogramming whatever happened to him to be ambitious and a work-a-holic. Let alone disappearing. That son sure is a handful. I think it's very good for him they moved from Straightsylvania. Truly love this series and can't wait for more!
7/13/22, 10:01 AM
thank you Ediam for having incridible and super hot stories for us. can not wait to see your other hot stories. :100:
Anon
7/13/22, 9:44 AM
Damn poor Johannes Happy for Larry though
7/13/22, 9:34 AM
Amazing ending. Love every part of it.
7/13/22, 9:12 AM
The best story has returned! I was beginning to worry that you might have abandoned this story or that we would have to wait a long time because of your new series. Thanks for continueing. Hoping for Tanner and the pastor to have a talk again soon. My favorit part of the story.
Somnus
7/13/22, 8:37 AM
I'm excited were getting such a well built story so soon after Need For Speedo! I enjoy your hostel stories and the character descriptions here are so well done. Looking forward to Pt.2 !
Somnus
7/13/22, 8:33 AM
I read the originals a whole bunch of times so its nice to be able to read again with new content. It all feels like meaningful too. There's no fluff or needless complication. I'm glad you continued with it after the long break :)
7/12/22, 11:34 PM
I've been waiting for exactly this: "“Huh?” Himbo and Obmih asked." So much fun, and a mystery man! Who could he be? Congratulations, Nori old chap! :monocle_face:

7/13/22, 6:44 AM
@Essex thank you kindly my good fellow :monocle_face: