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7/12/22, 10:44 PM
Fantastic and classic Elan Musk! A daddy craving the release only his very willing slut of a sun can give him. Always a massive turn on.
7/12/22, 10:41 PM
Ok, I'm definitely curious and wanna know why "the old man" is not getting and the damned kids are all hard for it! Damn those kids and their erections! Can't wait for the conclusion!
7/12/22, 12:20 AM
Thanks, Piko. You're one of my favorite commenters. :)
7/12/22, 3:59 PM
This was an excellent first story. Do you plan to continue?

7/12/22, 9:46 PM
@Beaner thanks! Yeah I might continue it. If I do I would probably give Jake back a little bit of his manhood, maybe in exchange for some other modification, then turn to Brad to shrink him. I regret going so far with Jake’s size.
7/12/22, 8:51 PM
Fantastic story! Cock shrink is one of my favorite kinks to explore here, and your approach to it is really interesting (and hot!). I'm definitely curious to know what more you have in mind for these characters/this story. For instance, I wonder why the nanobots last 5 years if it only took about two months for Jake to get to that state. To me, Brad proposing 3-6 months of no/few orgasms seems believable as a challenge that Jake could win but ultimately fails; 5 years didn't let me suspend my disbelief that he had a chance, though it was still fun to read. I also wanted to see a bit more of the character reactions, because I'm still not entirely sure how Jake and Brad feel about everything so far, other than horny. I hope this comes across as constructive feedback from a reader's perspective, because I really enjoyed this, and I hope to see more from you! (whether it's this story or a brand new one) as far as inspiration, the "shrink 20% each orgasm" set up reminds me of ["Coupon Code: Littlest" by Ziel](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/1689186), one of my all-time faves.

7/12/22, 9:32 PM
@Razz TFs thanks for the feedback! Yes that was exactly the story I had in mind when I wrote this! I recently discovered this genre and also find it really appealing. I always intended to go back and add more reactions and exposition of the characters’ thoughts and feelings but it’s all so time consuming! And thought I better just get something out there before I spend a ton of time on it. I intended it to play out over a longer period of time but agree I should have changed the nano lifetime to a year or less. I still might. Thanks again!
7/12/22, 9:12 PM
This was hot and fun and sexy. Nice work!
7/12/22, 9:06 PM
How I love this series! And thank you for the shout-out to "Construction Tools"!
Bimarguy
7/12/22, 8:20 PM
Another great chapter , love how Marcus is excepting his fate . Knowing he is a sex object is even better , can’t wait to see what dad thinks
7/12/22, 8:15 PM
So excited for more of this! One of my favorite stories on the entire site!