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7/12/22, 8:15 PM
So excited for more of this! One of my favorite stories on the entire site!
7/12/22, 7:21 PM
Undoubtedly the best slice of life story around here And Obmih has definitely become my favourite. I can't wait for more! I wonder what that man's name is though...

7/12/22, 7:31 PM
@Twan Andersen A mystery indeed :smile:
7/12/22, 7:28 PM
Definitely glad to see you back at work with this and the final scene depicting the infiltration of the base was very enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing where you take this story and the series.
7/12/22, 7:10 PM
I must say that I’m impressed if that’s your first story and English is not your first language! It was a nice read and the premise of the story was very hot, if only a bit short. Reading more details how Dave’s mind and body corrupts with the twisted clothes would have been a nice touch, but hopefully we’ll read more stories about that mysterious shop from you in the future! I like your storytelling vibe! By the way, if you want people to proofread or give you tips and advices regarding English, don’t be afraid to ask in the Discord or the forums! This community is full of helpful and brilliant individuals! :-)
7/12/22, 5:34 PM
I love it! Another bit of Hypnothrill commentary—the ubiquity of memes and the generation gap—makes for a fun story. And as a 32-year-old, I feel the pain of the older guy. Not much room for us in the In-Between (so many gay dating apps have people looking for either 18-25 or 40+). We gays mature faster! :p But seriously, amazing work.

7/12/22, 6:53 PM
@Feed Your Head Unlike my fictional avatar "Mike," I turn 43 in another month, and I've already noticed how I'm basically invisible in certain gay spaces. I actually got along quite well with the young Englishmen I was rooming with, but I definitely had moments of feeling like a dirty old man (and feeling hopelessly out of touch when they all started talking about some TikTok-famous trainspotter).
6/24/22, 6:36 AM
Awesome story!

7/12/22, 6:37 PM
@Ruffcub Thank you!
Martin
6/26/22, 9:07 PM
I love it!

7/12/22, 6:37 PM
@Martin I'm glad! :)
Jun 12, 2022
August
7/12/22, 6:18 PM
Love this! Almost like a spin-off of the Honey series! Can’t wait for more!
7/12/22, 5:18 PM
How dare you leave us with a cliffhanger?! I need the next chapter ASAP. But for real, this chapter was super hot and heartwarming. I love that Marcus ended up being a pretty smart guy. This is a refreshing concept and I'm happy he seems truly happy. He is the best boy and must be protected. The writing was also very interesting, the ratio between plot and porn was well balanced and with many relatable scenes/fantasies. I really like that aside from the mind altering weed this story is still realistic so you can really picture yourself in it! I expected that D will share Marcus at the gym, but I think what happened was also hot and helped prepare us for the ending of the chapter. However, X&D are still assholes. While I can understand Xavier's temptation to have sex with his long time crush, they didn't attempt to make him a boyfriend, only a sex slave. It was by Marcus' actions, both sexually and romantically that they changed their minds. Plus they didn't only make him their sex slave, but from the sound of it, their slave in general, altering his mind as to cater to their every need. I admit I didn't understand if they are still partially hanging like all times, which might change the equation a bit, but not enough to redeem them.

7/12/22, 5:28 PM
After reading @Heru Kane’s comment, I thought I better clarify: At this point I don’t think we need a “turning of the tables” or have X&D get some cosmic punishment. But I do think they need to really understand the weight of their actions, feel remorse and most importantly make up for it by doing right by Marcus. It’s perfectly fine to have a dom-sub relationship, but they can’t treat their best friend as an object or even as a “regular slave”. IMO they need to treat him with the respect and love he deserves (while keeping the dirty talk. I love dirty talk), and also standing by his side (i.e. giving Robert an undercut instead of letting him humiliate Marcus in the bad way).
7/12/22, 3:58 PM
I never thought the two were bad so I am glad there was no comeuppance or anything. This was a fun and sexy and cute and also romantic chapter. I kind of wouldn't mind it ending here - maybe with the cut off being them in bed before the question is asked, I mean depending on what happens next. I do have to admit I don't see the two scenes of him walking naked as much 'public humiliation' - one was at a gay beach, no consequence, and the other was at a somewhat gay gym, no consequence. So to me its the fun kind of humiliation and not the social suicide woe is me un-fun kind. I do have to admit I don't really see them thinking of him as a 'sex object' but more as the submissive bottom in their relationship, and I like that. His mind isn't fogged. His life is his own. And fun is totally had. Now the father, hmm, interesting and I have to admit someone that, from the little convo I have seen, I am not to much a fan of. Anyway, fun sexy times here. Good story. Needs more rimming*! haha *sorry not sorry! :) But seriously good stuff!

7/12/22, 5:21 PM
@Heru Kane I like happy endings so at first I was very willing to let the story end here, but once the cliffhanger was set, I need to know what's going to happen. I'm okay with hardships as long as I know there's going to be a happy and good ending