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7/12/22, 8:51 PM
Fantastic story! Cock shrink is one of my favorite kinks to explore here, and your approach to it is really interesting (and hot!). I'm definitely curious to know what more you have in mind for these characters/this story. For instance, I wonder why the nanobots last 5 years if it only took about two months for Jake to get to that state. To me, Brad proposing 3-6 months of no/few orgasms seems believable as a challenge that Jake could win but ultimately fails; 5 years didn't let me suspend my disbelief that he had a chance, though it was still fun to read. I also wanted to see a bit more of the character reactions, because I'm still not entirely sure how Jake and Brad feel about everything so far, other than horny. I hope this comes across as constructive feedback from a reader's perspective, because I really enjoyed this, and I hope to see more from you! (whether it's this story or a brand new one) as far as inspiration, the "shrink 20% each orgasm" set up reminds me of ["Coupon Code: Littlest" by Ziel](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/1689186), one of my all-time faves.

7/12/22, 9:32 PM
@Razz TFs thanks for the feedback! Yes that was exactly the story I had in mind when I wrote this! I recently discovered this genre and also find it really appealing. I always intended to go back and add more reactions and exposition of the characters’ thoughts and feelings but it’s all so time consuming! And thought I better just get something out there before I spend a ton of time on it. I intended it to play out over a longer period of time but agree I should have changed the nano lifetime to a year or less. I still might. Thanks again!
7/12/22, 9:12 PM
This was hot and fun and sexy. Nice work!
7/12/22, 9:06 PM
How I love this series! And thank you for the shout-out to "Construction Tools"!
Bimarguy
7/12/22, 8:20 PM
Another great chapter , love how Marcus is excepting his fate . Knowing he is a sex object is even better , can’t wait to see what dad thinks
7/12/22, 8:15 PM
So excited for more of this! One of my favorite stories on the entire site!
7/12/22, 7:21 PM
Undoubtedly the best slice of life story around here And Obmih has definitely become my favourite. I can't wait for more! I wonder what that man's name is though...

7/12/22, 7:31 PM
@Twan Andersen A mystery indeed :smile:
7/12/22, 7:28 PM
Definitely glad to see you back at work with this and the final scene depicting the infiltration of the base was very enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing where you take this story and the series.
7/12/22, 7:10 PM
I must say that I’m impressed if that’s your first story and English is not your first language! It was a nice read and the premise of the story was very hot, if only a bit short. Reading more details how Dave’s mind and body corrupts with the twisted clothes would have been a nice touch, but hopefully we’ll read more stories about that mysterious shop from you in the future! I like your storytelling vibe! By the way, if you want people to proofread or give you tips and advices regarding English, don’t be afraid to ask in the Discord or the forums! This community is full of helpful and brilliant individuals! :-)
7/12/22, 5:34 PM
I love it! Another bit of Hypnothrill commentary—the ubiquity of memes and the generation gap—makes for a fun story. And as a 32-year-old, I feel the pain of the older guy. Not much room for us in the In-Between (so many gay dating apps have people looking for either 18-25 or 40+). We gays mature faster! :p But seriously, amazing work.

7/12/22, 6:53 PM
@Feed Your Head Unlike my fictional avatar "Mike," I turn 43 in another month, and I've already noticed how I'm basically invisible in certain gay spaces. I actually got along quite well with the young Englishmen I was rooming with, but I definitely had moments of feeling like a dirty old man (and feeling hopelessly out of touch when they all started talking about some TikTok-famous trainspotter).