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7/12/22, 12:37 PM
I love the expanded version of this chapter, especially the context to show that Ritchie's conversion wasn't random, but was part of a targeted takeover of the military base, in response to the EMP our deaf heroes detonated. Very hot, well-written stuff!
7/12/22, 12:19 PM
I love hearing Xavier’s inner monologue about his feeling for both boys. Made me sad, but that was balanced nicely with the public humiliation Marcus was subjected to. Muah! I like how Marcus took control during the shower blowjob too, and that Darius didn’t let Tyreese in on the action. The weed has affected them both, but it does feel now like Marcus’ Kinsey scale has been fucked with instead of him being in some kind of stupor that is bound to break. You ask if my opinion has changed…eh, yes. The relationship is much more equitable now. Perhaps the punishment for D&X comes now that everything is fine though? There is an obvious disturbance coming to their relationship dynamic…
7/12/22, 11:07 AM
The Daddies cant have a son with all that rubbish in his head he needs to become simpler, (well he is a Dr) accept his place within the rough neck household, maybe his Daddies scent will have the desired effect on him.
7/12/22, 7:57 AM
I cannot express to you adequately how much i have LOVED this series, even back when it was just a single entry story with Zack and Larry. It's been FUCKING AMAZING and i cannot wait for more!
7/12/22, 3:11 AM
That was a hot story.

7/12/22, 4:31 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm glad you thought so! I was a little worried that some of the hotness would get lost behind the drama. I'm glad it still shined through, and hopefully blended well?
Alex
7/12/22, 4:18 AM
Geez so good, love the gradual control. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
7/12/22, 4:18 AM
Loving this
D1344
7/12/22, 3:29 AM
Loved the story. Honestly goals.