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boi98229
7/11/22, 7:01 AM
Good story! My problem, when I find a good story, is that it is always too short.
Evan
7/10/22, 9:31 PM
Incredible! What a fantastic story. Just on its own it is magnificent and as an entry for Toxic Masculinity it's a wonderful and imaginative take on it. Shining even brighter given the requirement of the theme. The gradual build, the resistance and tension of avoiding Tao spreading his milk to others was wonderful and had me invested. His succumbing was probably inevitable but HOW that happened was glorious. Mentally more than physically. But both were perfect. The Axel eventually figuring out he and Tao love each other and his overcompensation is costing them happiness. Frantically trying to avoid being changed by a stranger. Wanting it to be Tao. So romantic and hot. Then the conclusion of their accepting each other and growing and pounding. Even when they lose their minds for a fortnight, they stick together. Very sweet. Puck is a mystery. And the two weeks of mindless horny fucking and feeding to change others is hot too. But also mysterious. Why two weeks. Why do they change back. How do they feel afterward. What happens to others changed during the two weeks, being already past 12. Instantly mindless bulls to join the rest? I also find the worldbuilding on this subtle but intriguing. Nut butter sounds like it has cum in it. The military fucking for conquest and dominating each other both for contest and for fun. Loved this. Well done!

7/11/22, 6:53 AM
@Evan The number of times I’ve read this comment in sheer delight embarrassed me. But I am proud to be proud of my work, and grateful that you loved it! You saw everything I was going for, you appreciated the little tidbits of worldbuilding I left—that’s my signature, I feel, is blending subtle worldbuilding into a story that can handle those extra hints—and you hit the nail on the head with nut butter. Yes, it involves cum. I hope I accomplished the effect of making the world feel like a real one, in which these characters live—even if some of its facts are surprising and not yet explainable, like the sex-based military. And Puck. Please, if you can, spread this around—I’m posting pretty late in the contest, and I can use all the ratings I can get. But don’t feel obligated. A review like this was enough to make me feel pride in my own work, and that’s enough reward for me!
Jack
7/11/22, 6:29 AM
Yeah I love it too! It would be nice if there was others stories with this theme!
7/11/22, 6:25 AM
I'll admit this had me really going. The significant changes while he jerked! Thanks dude
7/11/22, 6:10 AM
Not quite the website for this type of story. Would have been hotter if it had been in reverse and not have been so anti-gay and homophobic. Sorry not my thing.
Anonymous
7/11/22, 4:48 AM
More of this please!
7/11/22, 4:44 AM
Wow, worth the wait on a story from the master story teller. You are beyond compare.
7/11/22, 4:27 AM
Me thinks he is enjoying himself too much again.
7/11/22, 3:30 AM
Good to see you back posting again. This episode continues where the story left off perfectly and was enjoyable. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this world.
7/11/22, 3:29 AM
So glad to see this update! Like Hypnothrill said, I loved the part with the dad, the cops and the grafitti boy, it was cool to see this pockets being subsumed. A nice touch on those few short mentions of the wrestling coach and his star and the gaming borthers. They are great ideas I would love to hear more of!