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7/11/22, 4:27 AM
Me thinks he is enjoying himself too much again.
7/11/22, 3:30 AM
Good to see you back posting again. This episode continues where the story left off perfectly and was enjoyable. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this world.
7/11/22, 3:29 AM
So glad to see this update! Like Hypnothrill said, I loved the part with the dad, the cops and the grafitti boy, it was cool to see this pockets being subsumed. A nice touch on those few short mentions of the wrestling coach and his star and the gaming borthers. They are great ideas I would love to hear more of!
7/11/22, 3:02 AM
Great story, so so hot!
Anonymous
7/11/22, 1:45 AM
Absolutely phenomenal
7/11/22, 1:19 AM
When are we getting more chapters to amazing piece of art? I can’t wait to find out what happens next
7/10/22, 11:43 PM
The stuff with the cops and Mark Miller is such a great addition to the story. I can only imagine the orgy that ensues when his son Matt finally gets home!
7/10/22, 10:18 PM
The quality of your writing is novel worthy, let nobody tell you otherwise. Instead of publishing here, I suggest you join Smashwords and earn yourself some well deserved money or publish for free, if you prefer. This awsome website is very good for indie authors specialized in, well, porn I guess. haha For me, this was the best chapter so far, not because of the content in particular, but because of one simple yet thoughtful element. You could've made the "fuckboy" "Eric" just a random and forgettable dude, instead, you decided to focus on creating a cohesive backstory, one which fits seemlesly into the main story, and by doing that expanded the world. I appreciate it, made me laugh too. I'm a reader of many stories, currently even the arguably best adult comic book series, Spawn. Still, your ingenuity surprises me. When you're done, consider turning A Change Of Perspective into an ebook. On Smashwords, just like here, it wouldn't be the weirdest novel by a very long shot. Sidenote: Hopefully we'll learn more about the stranger as readers~ Finally, thank you for not giving up on this story! (Writing till now: 4/5)
Anonymous
7/10/22, 9:57 PM
^^^ next chapter please!