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7/10/22, 4:11 AM
Absolutely fun! I do enjoy nonsensical children's stories for gays, and you had me with all the alliteration! Kudos!
7/10/22, 4:11 AM
So I assume our pov guy will be mind controlled himself but imagining him not actually changed but instead taking over his father's stable of good boys is hot. Maybe his boyfriend can come over and the two can have some pets. This was a fun chapter.
7/10/22, 3:52 AM
Surprised this hasn't gotten more traction. Really good.
7/10/22, 3:36 AM
Enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. :thumbsup:
7/10/22, 3:24 AM
Sounds like Marcus is coming along quite nicely
7/10/22, 2:35 AM
Loved the extra bit we got at the end and can't wait for the epilogue to see where they all stand. In the end, he was a lot kinder to the wife than I would have expected. All in all, a fantastic story I will return to, no doubt.
Anonymous
7/10/22, 12:35 AM
Would love to see the wife’s new hubby or Shelby’s BF fall for our hero lol
7/10/22, 12:15 AM
Fantastic story! I love all the transformations as Tom evolves to Tommy. Very creative and well written. I'd love to do another chapter where Tommy evolves to become Tommi, the cute femboy 🥰
Evan
7/9/22, 11:00 PM
A great addition to the series. He's really discovered something that makes him feel good. Perhaps he will be inspired to please and learn how to give a blowjob for next time. I bet his dealer can help. Thanks for writing more to this. Enjoyed it! Hot too with the flashes of mindless pleasure followed by confusion as to why he's enjoying it.
7/9/22, 8:29 PM
So happy to be reading more of this!

7/9/22, 9:36 PM
@NeedControlling, thanks. Glad you’re enjoying it. Chapter 3 is in the works.