Recent Comments

4/1/25, 7:48 PM
great story! I'm curious to read more about ethan and Brads descent before going back to the office
4/1/25, 5:45 PM
Maybe one more with Ethan and Brad then back to the office with Ryan and everyone. Excited to see how Ryan changes
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4/1/25, 5:00 PM
Damn! So good. Bull understands his purpose and what he is to do. Love that he moos like a cow! Ethan the obedient servant. Bull the obedient cow! I'm so envious of both!
8/30/24, 9:03 AM
I’m enjoying this series. But would you be open to a proofreader? There are many errors that detract from the story.

8/31/24, 6:30 PM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) Sorry I’m dyslexic so I cant always see the errors even if I re-read it twenty times 😂 as to your question, I’ll think about it.

9/19/24, 7:40 AM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) I enjoyed the story and usually am pretty aware of errors. In this case I don't recall any, so i guess i can fairly say i didn't find them distracting at all. Perhaps my imagination was flying too high. Thanks for the story!

9/22/24, 9:58 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be revisiting this story soon with a new chapter.

4/1/25, 4:50 PM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) You and i have very similar submissive kinks. i absolutely loved 'Almost Perfect', which is now one of my absolute favorite stories, and my motivation for taking the time to create my first Curated List. Service is my pleasure, so if you should choose to use a proof-reader as suggested above, i would be happy to be of service to such a wonderful writer. (Personally i loved the story so much i read so fast to get the meaning that i didn't care what minor errors there might have been.)
4/1/25, 4:35 PM
I really appreciate the thought put into the hypnosis script. For me it makes the hypnosis and power shift feel more real, and the more real the hotter the story.
Anonymous
3/24/25, 12:54 PM
This is fun! Hope to read more.

4/1/25, 2:43 PM
@Anonymous Thank you very much ! I had a lot of fun coming up with that one, and I hope I get to find a good framing to get that whole world back on stage ! ^^
4/1/25, 2:24 PM
Hot stuff! Always nice to see more of this kind of stuff 😃

4/1/25, 2:40 PM
@[MstGay3000](/user/show/16188), thank you! Being an admirer of your work for some time, that means a lot to me. 😊🦶
oxly
3/30/25, 6:53 PM
incredibly hot story!! wish I had a friend like Dunc to drag me out to one of Mike's shows

4/1/25, 2:28 PM
@oxly thanks dude! same here, wrote him as my dream guy really lol
4/1/25, 2:22 PM
We could go back to the office. But what do you have in mind with Brad and Ethan if the story continues as is?