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6/26/22, 5:00 PM
When do you think you’ll release DADS POV

6/26/22, 6:21 PM
@Hdhshs proofreading now! Should be submitted by the end of the day. Then the epilogue will be coming out within the next week or so. I am working 10 hour shifts Mon-Thurs then going to a friends place the weekend of the 4th. Hopefully getting it out ASAP as it won't be quite as long or extensive as these chapters, but will be working on a slightly updated ending after discussing with one of my friends/proofreaders.

R248
6/29/22, 12:16 AM
@EdIam We’re thirsty here lol!

Anonymous
7/2/22, 12:46 AM
We’re dying here! @EdIam

7/2/22, 1:59 PM
:( @EdIam

7/3/22, 10:29 AM
@EdIam Please!

Anonymous
7/3/22, 7:05 PM
STEVEN MUST THINK @jerrygod

7/3/22, 7:07 PM
It’s coming!! I promise!! Just on vacay til tomorrow. Steven will be thinking soon followed by the epilogue! Just been a rough couple weeks 😜🥰

7/6/22, 5:16 AM
@EdIam today will post?:satisfied:

Anonymous
7/7/22, 12:46 AM
:(@jerrygod

7/7/22, 4:50 PM
@EdIam today? please:sob:

7/8/22, 5:30 PM
@jerrygod submitted!! Should be up tonight/tomorrow, depending on how quickly it gets approved. Working on the conclusion; just have a bit to add to it based on the amazing suggestion of one of my proofreaders ;) I'll actually finish a multi-part story soon!!

7/9/22, 3:06 AM
@EdIam wow amazing...you are the best and i will always be your crazy fan

Anonymous
7/9/22, 5:36 AM
!!!!!@EdIam
7/9/22, 5:25 AM
Would love to see what's next!
7/9/22, 5:16 AM
Amazing!! Loved the dynamic, not quite sure how the MC works but I agree it doesn't matter at all, would love to see more.
7/9/22, 3:50 AM
this series is a lot of fun, I was so happy to see that you updated today! I love the way you depict the mental changes
7/9/22, 2:46 AM
Not a bad start! I would like to see where this is going <3 On a side note, since its the track team, I hope there's a possibility for feet play~ Either way, enslaving jocks its always good <3
7/9/22, 2:20 AM
The slow burn of Max's mental changes was very hot.
7/9/22, 1:58 AM
Great descriptions of the transformations. Not a fan of the F word but great story.
6/19/22, 3:57 PM
This is one of the HOTTEST stories I have ever read in this site and in my life in general. As someone who grew up watching anime and reading manga, I have always wanted to see an erotic story about magical boys in super tight and skimpy clothing, with hot bodies, big assess and who always end up getting fucked by allies and villains alike - so you nailed every single thing on my checklist here. Also, the dirty talking and transformation of the magical boys into unapologetic sluts is so fucking hot. I always knew I wanted to see super slutty, whore like magical boys and you just delivered it to me. This story got me off so well last night and I got incredibly hot with Araci calling Max “Superslut”. Is there any way this could actually be his official superhero name? That would be really sexy to see, only if it’s just how he is called online by people… Also, kudos to you for Araci, I’m Brazilian and I loved all the references to my country. I can’t wait to see the other Magical Boys who will get into the group and turned into slutty heroes and also can’t wait to see the reaction of people as well when they start noticing their saviors getting more and more slutty and exposed as the story goes. Cheers dude, please don’t take too long to post another chapter, I already know I’ll reread this a lot till you do!

7/8/22, 4:16 AM
@Elmara I have just read your bio and saw that you are nonbinary, so I’d like to apologize for calling you dude and any other misgendering I might have done in my haste to praise your story. Was just checking out to see if there was an update when I saw your bio. Hope you’re well!

7/9/22, 1:45 AM
@Elmara Thank you so much for this comment and your enthusiasm for this story! "dude" is totally fine to call me, and we just didn't have the chance to answer because of timing! Actually, we have one more long scene to write before we'll be ready to edit and then share the next parts! We'll be introducing another Magical Boy~! So glad that we're hitting those buttons and love that you get to enjoy Araci as a Brazilian! <3 Superslut would make a great press nickname for Max!
7/6/22, 1:50 AM
I check this story out everyday to see if there’s an update ;) can’t wait for more!

7/9/22, 1:35 AM
@Elmara <3 <3 <3
7/9/22, 12:32 AM
I had to wait all week to have the time to really sit down and read this chapter. I'm so happy to see where you've lead us, and seeing Paul and his boys reunited. I love that prices were payed, even those that hurt, but it just gives everything so much more depth. You are writing a Saga, and you know I'm in for the ride. I hope to keep reading so much more and loving the nod to the the other initiate I was hoping to get to see again. Kudos!