Recent Comments

7/9/22, 5:27 PM
I just discovered this story and I agree with many other comments that it's one of the best in this genre, across all platforms. The story is creative and very well written. DoubleCream is exceptionally talented at writing with such color that both the physical and emotional stories are engrossing. I have written a few stories and I appreciate how much effort goes into a series like this. If some readers don't care for the changes in the last chapter, they should find another story rather than criticizing a masterful story that is completely aligned with the type of content one would expect to see in this genre. I would love to see this story continue! Maybe we see Luc develop into a devoted boiwife, with his behavior and appearance changing to be more of a pretty femboy, which is how many betas embrace their roles. It would also be amazing to see the pregnancy develop. It's so hot to think about him carrying their son. It would also be fun to see if the son is an alpha or a beta as he grows up. Either way, the interaction with his gorgeous parents will be entertaining. DoubleCream - you're honestly one of the best writers I've seen (and that's a very well-informed opionion, haha)! I hope you'll continue writing. If you'd like a collaborator, please PM me and let's chat!
7/9/22, 4:16 PM
magnificent, just straight magnificent! So happy to have a completed Edlam story!

7/9/22, 4:24 PM
@stez according to what Edlam said in the previous one, we can still wait for an epilogue and see how everyone is doing in the end, so this has yet to finish!

7/9/22, 5:14 PM
@zeeker8b yup! And off work til Tuesday. Actively working on it now and hopefully out within the next few days! Got a lot of great feedback about tying it up in a nice bow from my proofreader, so reworking parts now while also including many of the people we’ve run into throughout the several chapters.
7/9/22, 3:24 PM
I don't want it to end 😢
Willie Cici
7/9/22, 3:18 PM
I'm intrigued. Let's see where this is going.
7/9/22, 3:14 PM
This is so hot. I love the idea of magic cum especially with the dumbing down. I'm excited to see how far down Carter falls before Dusty saves him and then if Carter decides to keep some of his changes. I vote for an Ass upgrade so he can enjoy Bottoming more.
7/9/22, 2:06 PM
What a wonderful series this has been.
DrA
7/9/22, 2:01 PM
Excellent storyline, makes me feel close to Jesus :)
7/9/22, 12:30 PM
Great start..like to see him resist and be turned into a smoking skin as he should be!
Anonymous
7/9/22, 11:57 AM
:grinning:
4/25/22, 9:11 PM
What happened to part 2?

4/26/22, 1:31 PM
This part has been written for some time but I have never been happy with it. I finally decided it was still worth continuing as I already had so much written. It has taken on a life of it's own and and become very long........I also have written a kind of prequel to explain Ivans history but I'm still refining that.@

4/26/22, 1:34 PM
Sorry @mattersonline. There seems to be a problem with the chapter links. If you look under my stories list you will see chapter 2 which was published in March, 2018.

4/26/22, 2:20 PM
@Titan Awesome, thanks for the help.

Martin
4/26/22, 6:06 PM
@Titan I've fixed that series, it now shows all parts properly. Also, all of your stories are now assigned to your account.

4/27/22, 8:20 AM
@Martin Thanks so much Martin. I was looking at asking you to look into this and you were already onto it. I'm not sure why I have the additional entry with two stories in the authors list. It may have something to do with my email address change.

Martin
4/27/22, 9:33 AM
@Titan I've fixed that, too.

7/7/22, 9:12 PM
@Titan Not a lot of meat in this chapter, but it did move the story along. Looking forward to more.

7/9/22, 8:10 AM
@JayBear I agree. It was a little boring but was originally longer. I decided to publish this first as I was still working on the rest and there had been pressure to post sequels. Very close to publishing next part.