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blankbot
7/8/22, 5:50 PM
Nice writing--sleek and sophisticated.
Anonymous
7/8/22, 5:16 PM
Looove
Gym Bunny
7/8/22, 4:48 PM
Honestly, I don't know if this needs a second chapter. It seems pretty self-contained and complete, and everyone seems to have enough affection for each other already that it would kind of ruin it for Darius and Xavier to change Marcus much more. Heck, it's on the verge of that when they tell him he doesn't need to worry about his dick anymore. If a second chapter is forthcoming I'd love to see one about them helping Marcus to embrace his new bottom status. Maybe move him in, or encourage a little exhibitionism at the gym. I can definitely see Marcus giving a post-workout blowjob in the shower, and being coerced into giving more for the other guys walking in on them.
7/8/22, 4:30 PM
Where can i find that ad?
7/8/22, 3:10 PM
Great story. I’d love the next instalment to be max back at the gym but now actively trying to get max to fuck and use him again.
7/8/22, 12:08 PM
yo this rocks!! id love to see more stuff from this author
7/8/22, 12:00 PM
That was good
7/8/22, 9:33 AM
I’m a fan. It’s obvious to me that I love this story. I come back regularly to read this chapter. Batman has always been my favorite superhero. I love his style, his flair for dramatics, and all of that is explored in this chapter. From resistance to Rudy, to understanding if he succumbed, Superman would be next. To see the different ways Parasite uses the members of the bat family. I assumed in the end, Batman would find a way out. I was wrong. I got to see Batman lose. I love this story. I enjoyed seeing Jack’s dedication to his craft, his ability to weave an interesting twist into the canon of the characters. I loved it. With the reveal that Parasite was able to finally break Batman, with the help of his son it’s just a master stroke. The people that Batman knows best, trained, brought him down. All in a effort to get Parasite one step closer to Superman.
7/8/22, 8:42 AM
Woah the straight to gay sex scene in this is one of the best I’ve read. Really well done. Hot!