Recent Comments

tim
7/7/22, 8:02 PM
I love that Reed ended up in the speedo he had first been offered - when the seed had first been planted for his needs for Speedo. So hot - makes you wander why he resisted for so long - but at least he was able to fulfil his speedo destiny!
6/19/22, 1:20 PM
Hank is utterly detestible. The underage part was such a weird and gross addition for me. Tyler has every right to feel the way he does. I think you've really captured the sleazy, disgusting, violation of mind control.

Oddballs
6/19/22, 3:36 PM
@Norismo Tyler is not underage, he’s 19. Underaged would be if he was 17, but I made him the legal age.

6/19/22, 4:56 PM
@Oddballs "Not going to lie, Hank has always thought Tyler was attractive for the past couple of years. Hank coming out of the closet was one of the main reasons he and his wife split up, but thank God it didn’t get out that Hank used to jack off to naked fantasies of his own son – he doesn’t as often as he used to a couple of years back, but the underage thing was something to keep in mind; at least now, Tyler’s of legal age. Heck, even his cocky attitude when he’s in a good mood was a bit of a turn on. That is until Tyler’s puberty really began to make him get him into almost constant-" You expressly describe him as being underage, a few years back from 19 is 17 at the oldest. The fact that his is 19 now doesn't get rid of the fact that the dad was sexually attracted to a minor. The approval team had to discuss if the story would even be allowed on the site.

Oddballs
6/19/22, 5:14 PM
@Norismo I didn’t mean for it to look like that, I didn’t think that far into it. I don’t usually opt for minor stuff at all, I thought I made it seem acceptable, but now I can’t feel good about this anymore… I made an edit to try and make it at least a little better, but the fact that I made something as questionable as this makes me feel really sick about it… I’m sorry…

Martin
6/19/22, 5:28 PM
@Oddballs I have a slightly different stance on this (but I totally respect Norismo's as well). We can't control our attractions and fantasies. Even if someone would have actual pedophilic fantasies, it's not something to be condemned for. You don't consciously choose what you fantasize about. The point is what you act about. So I don't see this as problematic, not any more than any other incest fantasy and story.

6/19/22, 5:31 PM
@Oddballs The underage bit was my only issue with the story, it automatically made everything infinitely more sinister. Really it was so offputting that it reduced my enjoyment of the story to 0. I actually quite like the story, and the revision only improved it.

Oddballs
6/19/22, 5:51 PM
@Norismo *sniffle* okay. Thanks and sorry for the happenstance ;3;

6/21/22, 12:25 PM
@Norismo Maybe they're in the UK, in which case the dad was sexually attracted to a young man one year over the age of consent! (I'm all for prohibiting stories with actual pedophilia, but keeping in mind that the male body sexually matures several years before 18, this obsession with arbitrary numbers strikes me as a little silly).

Martin
6/21/22, 8:21 PM
@Hypnothrill Thank you. My point exactly.

7/7/22, 7:56 PM
@Norismo The concept of "Age of Consent" only applies to people's actions not their attractions. It's not like when someone turns 18 a switch is flipped and "bing!" they're on the dating market. I'm sure if you gave any person a random sampling of people both over and under the "Age of Consent" for their country or state no one could get 100% accuracy on their "legal" status.
7/7/22, 7:40 PM
Made my day again 💦
Anonymous
7/7/22, 6:36 PM
Fuck this was hot Ill have to read it again soon... Looking forward to more if his adventures hehe
7/7/22, 3:14 PM
Love this one !
DD
7/7/22, 1:13 PM
This was fantastic, can't wait to see more of what develops from this series. Are we going to learn more about this mysterious weed? Or see it's effects on other people? Or even see how Marcus continues to become effected in the future? Keep up the good work 👏
Anonymous
7/7/22, 11:51 AM
Love the idea, but wish it was a bit longer and more detailed especially towards the middle/end. Or perhaps another chapter where the gay husbands stay gay and together but turn into total chavs? How do they all transform in detail? What was happening with Bryan after he put on the cap in detail?

SkaterBoy97
7/7/22, 12:21 PM
Yeah you are right. It was my first real story so I rushed a bit to complete it and to post on the website. For my nex story I will do things more slowly for a better end result. Thank you for your advices! It will help me to improve!
7/6/22, 8:12 AM
You should probably put a homophobia tag. Not all people are into gay to homophobe stories like this.

SkaterBoy97
7/7/22, 12:17 PM
@Benz Done! Thank you for the tip!
Horn
7/6/22, 6:41 AM
Good story line! i like the ideas

SkaterBoy97
7/7/22, 12:16 PM
@Horn Thank you so much!
Anonymous
7/7/22, 12:11 PM
Agree that it could have been more fleshed out and we would love to know what actually happened. Perhaps reactions of people and neighbours would be interesting too, especially cause he went for a really untypical 'haircut'. The one you are referring to is actually called male-pattern baldness.