Recent Comments

Evan
7/7/22, 10:09 AM
I'm hoping there is a reversal and Carter can get some of himself back, maybe just with a new flexibility in his sexcapades. But even if there isn't, this series is really clever and very hot. Loving the changes being made. Looking forward to the next chapter. My vote would be for Carter going to caster upgrades to frustrate Rusty that he's still holding out.
Evan
7/7/22, 10:05 AM
I really love this series and am looking forward to more. I have a bad (good?) feeling for the future of our mystery solver delving into himbo affairs. Guess we'll see. Can't wait to see where it goes. And hoping everyone ends up happy.
Evan
7/7/22, 10:04 AM
I'm eager to see where you take this story. I enjoyed getting the guys to compare notes this chapter and clearly their hormones are in control now.
Jul 3, 2022
Evan
7/7/22, 10:02 AM
I enjoyed this. A fun premise and who doesn't love a straight guy finding the joys of gay sex. I think the feedback you've gotten from great writers on the site is worth listening to but I'd also like to thank you for taking the plunge and posting for us to enjoy your writing.
Evan
7/7/22, 9:59 AM
New story for me but love the concept. Thank you for posting!
Baby Sal
7/7/22, 9:19 AM
Great story, but wished it continued and had more gay action or gay fun in the end.
7/7/22, 8:16 AM
Nice collection!
Bl Guy
6/29/22, 7:07 AM
I am so happy that my favorite series got another chapter.. I just love this series so much, it encompasses everything I love. Although imma bit salty that Xander didn't remember Janus at all when hypnotized by Rio, I kinda wanted him to realize something was amiss in the back of his mind and try to resist a bit, after all, he wasn't new to hypnotism. Anyway, I hope we can get a spinoff with Sam and Rio, it'll be awesome!

6/29/22, 8:21 AM
@Bl Guy I was going to have it happen like that, but I wanted to make a contrast between Rio and Janus, with the former having stronger hypnotic power and the latter having a stronger... tail power. Since Xander was caught by surprise, having never expected to meet a merman, that's why he fell :P

Bl Guy
7/7/22, 7:11 AM
@Twan Andersen Lol I understand... but all in all, I'm team Janus through and through. Looking forward to what you write next...
7/7/22, 6:53 AM
Love this series!
7/7/22, 6:15 AM
Hi Readers - I want to thank everyone for their continued patience with this re-write. I have not abandoned this project, but the last few months pulled me in a way that I wasn't able to give this the time I wanted (more on that below). As of right now the next chapter is a little over halfway done and should be posted soon, but I'm not the fastest creative writer. Because it was brought up, I do want to share that the OG author has not reached out to me with any complaints about the direction the story has taken and has access to the rough drafts of all the chapters as well as the outline for the stories. In the earlier chapters, if he had feedback as I was writing it is taken into consideration before a chapter is published, he is welcome to do that still should he chose and that is one of the agreements we made for me to share my version of his story. With that being said, in transparency I started a second master's degree in January and just wrapped up summer classes two weeks ago. Not to mention I had to move for work and some other things personal things took place right after this chapter was posted. My goals are to hopefully put up another two chapters before my work/degree picks up again in August-September and then be back again with another 1-2 chapters at least shortly thereafter before needing to take a break again in late November. As I have alluded to in posts before, I have roughly a lot planned, outlined, and mapped out for readers to enjoy, but I'm doing this re-write project for my own personal enjoyment and I want to be happy with what I write before calling it a definitive version to be shared out. Thank you all for your understanding.