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7/6/22, 7:54 PM
That was fun 😄
7/6/22, 7:51 PM
Just a heads up to the author, I had to put in a quick fix to this story because it got accidentally added as a second chapter to an unrelated story from 2020. Apologies to any excessive e-mails you may have received as I worked on the fix! It should be all good now, though. (And adding this note here, too, for any readers who may have been confused by seeing a two-chapter story in the contest.)
Anonymous
7/6/22, 6:53 PM
This is the funniest example of a Brit trying to emulate casual American conversation I've ever read 😂
7/6/22, 5:55 PM
Inspired to write again by your work.
7/6/22, 5:09 PM
Yeah this was hot. So glad you gave us a bit of the top's pov as he rimmed Marcus. It will be interesting to see what happens next. I do have to admit I feel bad for Marcus - because they made him leave rather than spooning him all night long and stuff. But yeah some fun things that turn dudes into needy bottoms sounds super fun. The future assplay is gonna be fun!
Martin
7/5/22, 4:44 AM
What can I do to avoid having to wait for another year for the next chapter? Bribe you? Let you fuck me? Getting you a drone for a weekend? Turn myself into your drone? Turn you into a drone?

7/6/22, 4:28 PM
@Martin The latter! ;P
7/6/22, 4:08 PM
Oh I am definitely a huge fan of Jack Parker's stories now. I read all 4 chapters in one sitting and they were mind blowing. The attention to detail and plot is A+++!
6/30/22, 4:57 PM
The books were hilarious. Also I hope Wolf comes back and is pup. Also also I feel for the agents. Maybe they can quit the evil mother and start working for Sam. Sexy stuff here. The rimming was hot. The hypno powers are fun. Great story!

7/6/22, 2:10 PM
@Heru Kane Oh, I got plans for the minions too, don't you worry.
6/13/22, 8:10 PM
This is a wonderfully constructed story and so insightful for any reader. Our minds fool us into seeing what we need to hear, in this case, your line: "Denial, as they say, is a huge fucking ocean somewhere far away you don’t have to deal with" was mindfully interpreted as "Thames, as they say, is a huge fucking ocean somewhere far away you don’t have to deal with". We push things or sequester things so far out that we dont have to deal with them, or ourselves, but how much more revealing and relieving if we do. Excellent impressive work!

7/6/22, 2:09 PM
@Stroppy Author I don't know why I didn't get notification for this. Once again, thank you so much for the kind words!
6/30/22, 3:49 PM
My one thing is why princess and not Prince. That doesn't compute to me. Lol

7/6/22, 2:07 PM
@Heru Kane Princess is too fabulous and non conformist, and it's also a nod to a character somewhere else. As for the other comment, we alreadu discussed and won't spoil here.