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7/6/22, 3:45 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Heartfelt, poignant, and I feel it's a lot more hopeful than you think. It's a truly loving fable, that we should take to heart, remembering the good and not letting ourselves be drowned by the bad. Also, Florian's gift every Christmas is truly love. Thank you for sharing this amazing story, Cockatrice, I will remember it.
Jul 3, 2022
Willie Cici
7/6/22, 2:15 AM
Great story! Loved the transformation and the plot twist! Keep writing. I'll read it.
Evan
7/6/22, 2:05 AM
I hadn't seen this before elsewhere but reading this my mind instantly said "a classic feel". Loved it! The surprise "test pattern" and their slowly submitting to it.
JPM
6/22/22, 2:33 AM
This is HOT! It’s like there IS something like occurring elsewhere on the planet today! So sexual and intriguing! I wonder what happens next!?

7/6/22, 1:19 AM
@JPM Thanks for the feedback. I better start working on the next chapter, glad it was well recieved
7/5/22, 11:42 PM
Damn imagine the whole world goonin at the same time
7/5/22, 11:28 PM
Thanks for sharing. That was hot. I was wandering if Howie with HR would call his emergency contact and his father and brother would show up at work with a speedo and his brother would seed Reed. No matter how he put his first pair on I would have seeded him.
7/5/22, 10:49 PM
This is such a well-written and interesting concept for a story - and very hot, to boot! Looking forward to the next installment!
7/5/22, 10:42 PM
As always, a great conclusion to one of your mass enslavement stories that turn the world into a hot paradise. I always love it when our protagonist falls and becomes the tool to affect someone else, showing he has given in completely. The moment he told the guy he missed a spot was the confirmation of how far gone he was, and as he enjoyed watching Clark, he needed but a push. Glad it was the pink speedo that finally did him in, happy and obedient to follow to his final lesson.
7/5/22, 9:22 PM
I'm voting for the custom special ability to improve casting. I like that it's vague enough to have fun with. As for the story part of this, it's still hot, and I still want Rusty to get some comeuppance, but I've also changed my mind to have Carter retain some of what he's been given by Rusty. Especially since he's enjoying it. I'm curious if Rusty telling Dusty to get a Dom top perspective gave Dusty something more to work with to maybe take control of the situation. I'm also wondering how Rusty being both the GM and a player character will balance out. I can't imagine that this magic game won't try to rebalance things. Looking forward to where you take this next!
7/5/22, 8:26 PM
Hot premise but it is hard to read without some formatting.